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  • herbert
    herbert4mth
    Commented

    You already recommended this fic on chapter 136

    Ch 157 Harry Potter and Ice Cream Delights by Luckner
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    Fanfiction Recommendations
    Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
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  • herbert
    herbert5mth
    Replied to ONE_ABOVE_ALL

    I remember seeing this on FanFiction.Net

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    Naruto : The War Hero
    Anime & Comics · Uzumaki_Kushina_21
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  • herbert
    herbert6mth
    Replied to Br4tsch

    I tried reading but it was too hard. Author uses the … to end almost every single sentence/paragraph. It drove me crazy.

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    Naruto : Journey to Dragonhood
    Anime & Comics · Lord_Perfecto
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  • herbert
    herbert6mth
    Posted

    I still have no idea what black rock shooter is but this story is amazing anyways, one of my new favorites

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    Bounty Hunters: True Legends (Elden Ring)
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Posted

    I’m on chapter 129

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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Posted

    Really horrible translation, instead of being called “One Piece”, the world is called “The Pirate”. It’s just a bad mtl.

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    One piece: 100 times the practice plug-in
    Anime & Comics · The_Legend_
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Posted

    MHA+Persona+Horimiya=Profit

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    Trickster's Game
    Anime & Comics · MercyLeague
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Commented

    One who trains swordsmanship: Swordsman One who trains fightsmanship: Fightsman

    [Ability]: [Fightmanship: Lv3]
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    My Touch Corpse System
    Anime & Comics · InJustThis
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Commented

    Amen

    Evidently I HAVE to write this: People, my dear readers. THERE WILL BE NO WORLD TRAVELING. EVER. FINITE.
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    Evolution System in High School of The Dead
    Anime & Comics · LastInkBender
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Replied to Dave_Guest

    Dark naruto Fanfics are rare? The only naruto fanfics I have found on this site have been dark :(

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    In Naruto with More More Devil Fruit
    Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Posted

    Its pretty good, I just noticed that you’re missing question marks and exclamation points in the places they belong. Without them you cant really tell the MCs tone of voice. I dont know if you fixed this because I haven’t read too far yet

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    While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Posted

    Good story :) Keep it up!

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    Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · TheMostAbstract
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Commented

    “Oh my goodness, its really him, he is destined to be one of the greatest experts of all time”. “tssss~” he sucked in a breath of air at this discovery. Lol it becomes easier and easier to guess the author’s train of thought in these types of novels.

    That’s right! It’s Tyrant Bear!
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    Reincarnation Of The Strongest Sword God
    Video Games · Lucky Old Cat
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Replied to empire1

    It seems fine on the surface, but many sentences make no sense, breaking any sense of immersion you have. It’s one of those things that can make you drop on chapter one.

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    One-click Cultivation System
    Fantasy · _Ancient_God_
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    Your writing style is confusing. I dont understand why you dont use quotation marks. It makes it kind of difficult to read. It’s like the characters are speaking to eachother through their thoughts.

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    World's Strongest Cameraman
    Magical Realism · SomeoneBad
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    Does anybody mind commenting a better synopsis on this review? I can’t read without knowing what I’m getting myself into.

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    Extraordinary David
    Fantasy · Melon-Seed-Eating Crowd
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Commented

    [Extreme Writing Tip] I just noticed that you don’t fully capitalize the names of places. What I mean is Soaring cloud city—>Soaring Cloud City. It’s the same for chapter titles as well. :-)

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    Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System.
    Fantasy · tempestpanda
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    I can understand the writing of a 2 year old better than I will ever understand the author’s writing. I cannot comprehend how the grammar got so bad. I would be suprised if the author is using google translate, because google translate seems pretty good after reading this.

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    Group Anime
    Anime & Comics · Cute_Romansa
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    I accidentally downloaded a virus and now I can only write in WIDE LATIN and also whenever I type WIDE LATIN it automatically gets capitalized help

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    I AM NPC69
    Video Games · KiraMinoru
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    This is a fairly early review but so far its a pretty good read. The one major problem I see is the author is writing from a 3rd person point of view but then accidentally uses a 1st person point of view. It’s incredibly jarring and the only gripe I have. When the narrator is summarizing whats happening it shouldn’t seem like the MC is speaking.

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    Zack Fair on Remnant
    Anime & Comics · NoirZero11
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