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  • herbert
    herbert20h
    Posted

    I think the premise for this is very cool. I hope you continue with it 🙏🙏🙏😩😩😩

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    Reborn as Nanami Kento
    Anime & Comics · Divine_Sex_Dragon
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  • herbert
    herbert6mth
    Commented

    new version of ligma just dropped

    And through it all, the wood and leaves even got new names; Lagana and Foglia respectively. I quite like those names, to be honest.
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    In DxD with the Eyes of God
    Anime & Comics · Ventus889
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  • herbert
    herbert8mth
    Commented

    -2 for making a chapter in order to rant

    Ch 15 Purge
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    Themyscira's women not letting me go
    Anime & Comics · phantompain
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Commented

    You already recommended this fic on chapter 136

    Ch 157 Harry Potter and Ice Cream Delights by Luckner
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    Fanfiction Recommendations
    Anime & Comics · Monsterb620
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Replied to ONE_ABOVE_ALL

    I remember seeing this on FanFiction.Net

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    Naruto : The War Hero
    Anime & Comics · Uzumaki_Kushina_21
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Replied to Br4tsch

    I tried reading but it was too hard. Author uses the … to end almost every single sentence/paragraph. It drove me crazy.

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    Naruto : Journey to Dragonhood
    Anime & Comics · Book_DragonKing
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  • herbert
    herbert1yr
    Posted

    I still have no idea what black rock shooter is but this story is amazing anyways, one of my new favorites

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    Bounty Hunters: True Legends [To-Repost]
    Anime & Comics · Photosphere
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    I’m on chapter 129

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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    Really horrible translation, instead of being called “One Piece”, the world is called “The Pirate”. It’s just a bad mtl.

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    One piece: 100 times the practice plug-in
    Anime & Comics · The_Legend_
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Posted

    MHA+Persona+Horimiya=Profit

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    Trickster's Game
    Anime & Comics · Jaxsin
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  • herbert
    herbert2yr
    Commented

    One who trains swordsmanship: Swordsman One who trains fightsmanship: Fightsman

    [Ability]: [Fightmanship: Lv3]
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    My Touch Corpse System
    Anime & Comics · InJustThis
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Commented

    Amen

    Evidently I HAVE to write this: People, my dear readers. THERE WILL BE NO WORLD TRAVELING. EVER. FINITE.
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    Evolution System in High School of The Dead
    Anime & Comics · LastInkBender
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Replied to Dave_Guest

    Dark naruto Fanfics are rare? The only naruto fanfics I have found on this site have been dark :(

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    In Naruto with More More Devil Fruit
    Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Posted

    Its pretty good, I just noticed that you’re missing question marks and exclamation points in the places they belong. Without them you cant really tell the MCs tone of voice. I dont know if you fixed this because I haven’t read too far yet

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    While Others Cultivate, I LVL UP In My Sleep Using The Dungeon System
    Fantasy · Adam_A
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Posted

    Good story :) Keep it up!

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    Is it Wrong to Build a Bonfire in the Dungeon?
    Anime & Comics · TheMostAbstract
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Commented

    “Oh my goodness, its really him, he is destined to be one of the greatest experts of all time”. “tssss~” he sucked in a breath of air at this discovery. Lol it becomes easier and easier to guess the author’s train of thought in these types of novels.

    That’s right! It’s Tyrant Bear!
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    Reincarnation of the Strongest Sword God
    Games · Lucky Old Cat
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Replied to empire1

    It seems fine on the surface, but many sentences make no sense, breaking any sense of immersion you have. It’s one of those things that can make you drop on chapter one.

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    One-click Cultivation System
    Fantasy · _Ancient_God_
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Posted

    Your writing style is confusing. I dont understand why you dont use quotation marks. It makes it kind of difficult to read. It’s like the characters are speaking to eachother through their thoughts.

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    World's Strongest Cameraman
    Urban · SomeoneBad
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Posted

    Does anybody mind commenting a better synopsis on this review? I can’t read without knowing what I’m getting myself into.

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    Extraordinary David
    Fantasy · Melon-Seed-Eating Crowd
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  • herbert
    herbert3yr
    Commented

    [Extreme Writing Tip] I just noticed that you don’t fully capitalize the names of places. What I mean is Soaring cloud city—>Soaring Cloud City. It’s the same for chapter titles as well. :-)

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    Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System.
    Fantasy · tempestpanda
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