Plastic bow?!

I just want to caution the author, the post above looks sketchy. So, I researched about company on the internet and opinions about stary was not very flattering. I request the author to do own research before signing the contracts. The talk was contract was very unfair to writers. The link below speak about experience of a writer with said company. https://***.google.com/amp/s/authorchristopherdschmitz.wordpress.com/2018/10/10/things-to-know-about-dreame-publishers-also-known-as-ficfun-and-stary-ltd/amp/

Thanks for the chapter. It was satisfying and I could see the growth of author right through this novel. All the best for your next project.

I still don't understand why author monetized his fiction with Webnovel. With his frequency of posting chapters he won't be earning anything from it. Also, waiting for a chapter update patiently. Just letting you know that I am not shouting RIP, yet.

Ha ha it may be anticlimactic ending but it aptly suits the title of this story. See you in next project.

Thanks for the chapter.

Ten out of ten -> ten out of twenty (Kang seo shooting arrow scene) The way you called the beastman confused me lot in this chapter. Please use either he or it for beastman but not both. Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter By the way, I found some mistakes in this chapter. Question a few more questions -> ask few more questions Dipped -> entered (city)

It is unbelievable too many plot holes to believe incidents in chapter. Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for the chapter.

The above comments were interesting. The grammar in this novel was bad but not to the extent it can be compared with machine translations. Interestingly, readers expect author to accept the criticism without a word. All I want to point out that author is also human with feelings. Another interesting thing was readers almost want to prove their point, which almost made me laugh. (There was no empathy for author from readers. Hard to write a novel in his not native language.) The said review cannot be even considered review (in my opinion) not because reviewer did not follow the Webnovel rules to post review. No, because review was not done to point out mistakes or reviewer did not even take time to explain common mistakes done by an author. So, cannot be considered as review mostly it was like a rant by disgruntled reader (as author pointed out other criteria was not considered and most probably ratings for others were not rated properly) This is my opinion as author said earlier he was doing his best. So, all we can do was pointing out mistakes or common grammatical mistakes in his writing(of course politely, author has feelings).

Poor animals killed because of greed of terrible humans. The gripe with Xianxia/wuxia genre didn't have any regards for wildlife.

I caught up with chapters. Oye, author when are you going to post the next chapter? I am waiting patiently. Before I forget, thanks for the chapter (I am a very polite reader, no one says in contrary).

Maybe but food is important part of culture.Tourist always samples the local cuisine and restaurants in their tours. So yeah, culture without importance for food is unimaginable. Yes, your view on food will be acceptable for China but not for Japan

In many cultures people will not directly point out mistakes. For example, in most of Asian cultures if boy/girl wear shorts/miniskirts (inappropriate for occasion). They will not question about it directly. Instead, they will mostly ask "Are you not feeling cold" if the person say, "no" they will simply switch topics. So, what I want to say is many concluded MC is weird or lack basic knowledge, but they simply refrain from calling out.

Dude why don't you ask for a moon. If, author only concentrates on slime farming and business then he will be cornering himself with an uphill task to write and there would not be many plot-points left to explore

Thanks for the chapter.

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Webnovel censored the word s*x in my review which made me think of all 18+ novels posted on this website (also self censorsing of s*x in this comment made me ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ). Since I am new to website, and feels like this is hypocrisy.

I enjoyed this novel. The big prologue came as a surprise but I loved it. That means this novel was not without faults far from it. Before describing the failings of this novel I like to say it not intended to hurt the author feelings but it is in interest to make this novel as a better novel. MC cannot go wrong was big let down for me so, there was little to no tension in this fiction. Because there was no failure or great learning experiences for a protagonist, and there was no character development/growth for MC which makes him bland and predictable. I personally liked to see the growth of MC emotionally. Harem was plus and minus for me in this novel, but it dealt good manner unlike other novels, but we see wives only for *** or filler parts. So, I want to request author to explore the relationship between husband and wives (give them more unique personality and chemistry between each of wives to the husband should be different and last but most important issue was a husband and wives do more than *** like interaction, gestures, tease (jokes) and small sacrifices in their relationships which can be explored further). Grammar was not bad but could be better. There were occasional typos. Since I am not a native speaker could not suggest more but need to be improved. I hope this review helps the author. I intentionally pointed out more mistakes than good because I personally believe review can point out mistakes and offer different views.