Not it is just right length, but bro please speed up a little bit.... It's kind of getting boring ...

Good start so Fare.... Let's see what's come late

Where do you think novel should end... At the beginning of 19th Century technology or in the mid 20th century technology tree....You should not limit with the real timeline But should also explore the possibility of some sci- fic. since, the MC has a system with him so it can also evolve and bring some new technology that was not in reality.... JUST SOME SUGGESTIONS 👆 At the end it only depends on how imaginative you are

Bro, finished it fast . What the reader wants or atleast what I want is to have more chapters on modernization military, industry, law and order, intelligence Agency fantastic toys , and exploration of other land. Also I want you to build a infrastructure boom in the whole country with ports, roadies bridge, hospital, courts, government centres ,and. Railways. And for that you have to speedup the steam engine development and then IC engine development.... [img=proud]

Bro, share the discord link

Now, that is something Vijay should change as soon as possible.... From cast system to more free movement of people from the birth based system to work based system ... Your identity is what you do or what have you contributed in the society... Not in which cast you were born from. .👍

Yeh... You have a point in that but it is a frictional story... So auther can do as he please..... Also what you say might not happen IF author choose to do so😉

It will make Vijay more robust and resilient mind ... He will carry more reform in the empire resolutely [img=recommend]

Bro, first of all I want to remind you that it is a frictional timeline so you can be free from what you wants to says as the plot is needed. That being said, as most of the Muslim that we have now was converted in the Mughal period we can also give muslim a choice that you can convert back to hindusium or go back to the Mughal Empire that is to the north. .. .for the story offcourse. Doing this will cost less for Vijay to implement the subsidy, school enrollment , land distribution and various benefits that Vijay offers to the masses ... ALSO it is benefits the unity of the nation.. .our region do not ask to converts other religion but for the sake of a more united nation we need to have only one voice.... Offcourse as long as that relion do not ask other people to convert other people .. .this king of relion can stay in the bharatiya Empire. .. Just like we have Jainism, etc

Bro, it was a good chapter . But also make sure that vijay reform throughly and make a force similar to FBI OR NIA (National investigative agency) for internal security, CIA OR RAW for external security. Also try to speed up the industrial upgrading as you don't have to flow the timeline of real life .... Make Steel ships, steam engine, military vehicals, combustion engine, more rebust revolver, etc . So that he could concert the Mugals as well as the whole world with his trade and grabbing resources like rubber trees plants, oil from middle east, various minerals that is not available in INDIA.

Bro, some time it is also good to get slice of life chapter but don't loose focus of the main plot. Also I want you if possible to get reference from the novel "I'm king of technology" as it have good kingdom building plot with the help of different industries. Also you can get creative speed up the plot as you already said that it is not original timeline so you can makeup inventions that is not possible in 100 years as the MC have whole science knowledge and can also train different scientist and also get richest in the process like his steel industry

Ok

Bro, I think you should focus on building various level of education like primary school , high school, college or university, etc. And various industry building like mechanical industry, agriculture industry, and then military building also go for various geological survey so that you can fine various resources also you can makeup some resource that are not available in India originally