love it need more

thanks might i suggest u use a ai app to create a cover photo for the novel

nice

love it

love the book so far

not too sure how long the author will continue the book but it's a nice change of pace compared to all the other mha fanfics it's refreshing.

Overall, it's a really good read for those interested in cultivation novels that are family oriented where the mc takes care of and looks after the family only thing i can say is by how it's looking it might not have a ton of chapters but a really good read i believe it'll prob have max 800 chapters and i can tell you the first 400 will be good 😎

This book is really intresting and taoes a unique approach to the world of ninjas I know there is another naruto fanfiction that delves into blacksmithing (Wandering Blacksmith) but i feel like just the quality of this one surpases it it also takes a unique approach of world traveling but not like most multiverse fics where they just up and leave and start a whole new story for 50 chapters and come back op as fuck i won't say much more but i really do believe anyone who stumbles across this should give it a chance!!

Mistake in the exam ranks momo got first not 3rd plus shotos quirks like noir except shoto doesn't use fire so theres no way he would be ranked that high ice doesn't help with most of the tests try not to favor shoto so much

overall pretty good tho

shoto took the recommended exam with momo and thats what caused her to be wary of shoto and have less confidence than she should also what started the rivalry between shoto and the wind dude

nice

You know the only reason aizawa was against him in the first place was because he couldn't control his quirk "that he though he had for his whole life" and aizawa is fair not unjust

i feel like he priced the pancreas too low atleast go for 5mil

🤣🤣 maybe the step mother was a tsundere after all

raven waifu 🫡🫡

nice

dark.... I loved it

this book is already published on webnovel by MoonEater8

thanks