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it's so unrealistic what's the use of damaging why don't they just punch with their fists if the is a skill to steal the ball mid air then they can never score
take all the power stones
you've got a reader in me
really love this story by the way so forgive me for being harsh
oh and can we focus on leonel I love aina but not so much I would read her story and I'm still deeply offended by that sorry excuse for a breakup
author please don't use a ridiculous excuse to remove aina's memory of leonel it's so predictable and cliche I would be so disappointed
isn't umtiti a defender
why does it all of a sudden feel like your dragging the story with unnecessary details and repitiond in the last few chapters
I like this story but can u pick a mode either you narrate or make it a main character pov stop jumping in and out it messes up the english
I understood nothing all these animal names are confusing
I actually really loved the creativity