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shockwave_josh16

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2018-12-11 JoinedGlobal
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    shockwave_josh161yr
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    it's so unrealistic what's the use of damaging why don't they just punch with their fists if the is a skill to steal the ball mid air then they can never score

    Ch 10 Dilemma
    Legendary Avatar: Chronicles of Wahda
    Sports · GREAT
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh161yr
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    take all the power stones

    Ch 49 Chapter 49: Preparation
    The Bookstore Mage
    Fantasy · Immortal_Simo
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh161yr
    Commented

    you've got a reader in me

    Ch 48 Chapter 48: A bluff
    The Bookstore Mage
    Fantasy · Immortal_Simo
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh161yr
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    really love this story by the way so forgive me for being harsh

    Ch 953 Rich
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh161yr
    Commented

    oh and can we focus on leonel I love aina but not so much I would read her story and I'm still deeply offended by that sorry excuse for a breakup

    Ch 953 Rich
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh161yr
    Commented

    author please don't use a ridiculous excuse to remove aina's memory of leonel it's so predictable and cliche I would be so disappointed

    Ch 953 Rich
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh162yr
    Commented

    isn't umtiti a defender

    Ch 357 Overwhelming Victory
    THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
    Sports · Mujunel_the_Mystic
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh162yr
    Commented

    why does it all of a sudden feel like your dragging the story with unnecessary details and repitiond in the last few chapters

    Ch 850 Raw Experience
    Dimensional Descent
    Fantasy · Awespec
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh162yr
    Commented

    I like this story but can u pick a mode either you narrate or make it a main character pov stop jumping in and out it messes up the english

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Thomas and Jimmy.
    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    Fantasy · Victor_Weismann
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh163yr
    Commented

    I understood nothing all these animal names are confusing

    Ch 74 Day Two (2)
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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  • shockwave_josh16
    shockwave_josh163yr
    Commented

    I actually really loved the creativity

    Ch 37 No Rest For The Wicked
    Supreme Magus
    Fantasy · Legion20
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