SilverArcs
I like overpowered main characters.
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SilverArcs2yrCommentedMost cars would be fine in the event of an emp. Most would at worst stall and require a restart. Such a groaner. Instead, why not claim it's a result of supernatural energies instead. SMH.
The group and everyone on the balconies walking up and seeing the scenes outside. There are multiple car crashes can be seen. There is one car that got flip over by the bus and crash into the bustop.. there are some passerby got hit and thrown away.... it was chaos outside... Not long after the mall light goes out. before anyone trying to say anything about it. A horrible thing happen..- SilverArcs3yrReplied to blacki
Yeah it's ridiculous. Taking back the company house makes sense, and assuming they really can erase only the memories of the cultivation technique without harming them, that seems fair too, but in what world do they take back money that's already been paid? Author is a bit of an idiot.
Yu Xiaochen was really fired, and the townhouse, as well as half a year's salary, were all taken back. Even the Gene Arcana secret technique, the Bahamut Absorption Technique was erased from his memory. It was terrifying, just too terrifying! - SilverArcs3yrCommented
To me at least, death/terminal seclusion very specifically refers to cultivators who are dying and their only survival path is a breakthrough. I find this use of the term to be poor.
This person had been an outer yard disciple of the Tiansang Spirit Palace. Unfortunately, he only had average talent. He had entered the spirit palace for three years, yet had only reached Level Three of the ten levels of spiritual cultivation. He had engaged in death seclusion for one month, determined to achieve a breakthrough to deal with the Windcloud Competition. - SilverArcs3yrCommented
inconvenience is the correct word. unconveniency isn't a word. although I immediately knew what you meant, so I guess it's legit from that perspective. :)
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In honor of Yamcha, gaaaaaaay.
However, Chu Kuangren was so enchanting that he could not help but feel weak in his presence. - SilverArcs3yrCommented
Gadget is such a generic word. You shouldn't rename things just to rename them. just call it a smartphone!
Kai nodded his head. Both of them went downstairs and saw their parents. Their father was sitting while reading news on his gadget. The gadget was a kind of smartphone, but it was a bit more technologically advanced. They lived in the 24th century, but due to the onslaught of the magical beasts, technology didn't progress that much. - SilverArcs3yrPosted
The premise and plot are interesting, but the MC just comes off as an idiot to me. I hate heroes who show too much caution, but too little is just as bad. At one point early on, he runs into difficulties because his magic is noticibaly different from other people, but after dealing with it, he immediately continues the behavior that attracted trouble. Also I have a strong preference for confident heroes, and he is written convincingly as shy, kinda dumb guy. It feels realistic but I didn't come here for realism.
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I really don't understand the need for a weird name. if it shoots spikes of ice, just call it ice spikes.
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