I haven’t read very far in yet but so far this seems to be the biggest shortcoming .

So far I’m finding this to be a very interesting read. I even like the point that the author encourages bad reviews if there’s something that you don’t like. So far I have not found anything that I dislike about it. I might later but u- to this point it’s been very clear about the Type of story that it desires to be, no questions asked and no apologies given . If the story continues to improve there’s a high likelihood that I’ll buy coins to read ahead . The main character has no qualms about who he is the things that he does. Besides , he was plotted against first and his revenge is well founded . Thank You to the author for writing an intriguing book. Normally these types of stories aren’t for me but so far I like this one.. thanks.

When it say mortal doe he mean no cultiva or not in divine realm of cultivating ? Sounds as if this woman has a very sorrow filled life . Probably some cultivator wanted her , she refused and then long story short she ended up here .. Sun Yang is probably going on a killing spree before long. Isn there a moongod emperor defendant working at a brothel? Any chan this is her?? I so then maybe H e had a few reasons to come here

So even a preen wom is trash in the heavens if a mortal.. sucks to be born here doesn it.

12 ham es To Lear n .. dang

Was heading in such a good direction up till the author just left the and quits .

Originally the guy was write, but after that contest (not sure how it went) he left. So here we sit with a pretty decent novel with 114 chapters and no future for it.

Last few chapters have said a lot of nothingness . get to some point information and plot.

I don’t think she is to powerful. wasn’t Su Yang one of the strongest people in the divine Heavens? Wouldn’t his women be as well ?

Lol, i was thinking the same . that while smart to observe his actions for clues , it wouldn’t have Been smart if he’d teleported awa… lol

I like the old man

So you’re saying that with you as her master could ever let her be ordinary ? She has nothing to hold her here in this world that may have given her power and talent but took away everything in return? If she’s wanting to go then Let her go! Don’t you think that if she trust this world enough to come looking for you just because it told her to, then doesn’t it stand up to reason that if it didn’t want her to leave it would tell her ? As opposed to telling her to find you ? Something odd about her story though. the world told her to find him and told her that her parents were dead? Doesn’t it stand to reason that someone might be looking for her ? She could use that moon rock so it makes me wonder if she could be Q mother?

So, we ask, “how did she get here?” Not thinking about that much are we? Maybe the old man left it aS a way back and forth? Hopefully, don’t want him leaving kids behind and also his apprentice ? Not a very good master is he?

Do you run around deleting reviews that dislike your book? I ask because usually when I see a book with this high of a like vs Dislikes i ask if it’s possible ? So if you do delete them ill Go to every popular book and unpopular ones and paste a review on it. yes/no? Your welcome to reply personally to me directly ?

Lol, show off much

I Sure he’ll take her back with him. hes always had a soft spot for little girl that Have been tossed away by this world . wonder how His former fiancé views his. Now ? Assuming that she relizes that he meant no harm to her. Just purely she didn’t know him a b, he basically protected her by letting the fiancé thing go away because now she realizes that he saved her and not harmed.

He does have a heart and never touches girls uner legal age. for a dUal cultivator at least hes no purve like the old seCt master using power to press young women

Lol

Ten years is a long time till we see her again ..loo

Boohoo.