People from the mobuseka world have an unusual perspective, to put it kindly lol (actual retards). They came up with a feudal system that fucks over the majority of nobility for no fucking reason, even though the royal house and central nobles have quite a lot of powerful magic weapons and literal fucking magic to make spy work and vassal policing a piece of cake for any Homo erectus with half a brain.

Prepared Speech lol

Mano já uso esse site tem anos, muito bom ver um Br se destacando! Review pros gringo: Novelty: This is the first fanfic of secret class I've seen anywhere; Grammar: Compared to others on this site, this is pretty hightier; Characters: Really well represented in lieu of the source material; The Mc is a Breath of fresh air compared to the cliches one would expect from this kind of story, either a wimpy loser or an edgy nutcase, Jair(Dae Ho) is surprisingly deep and witty and only wants to make the best of his situation while having fun and enjoying the ride. A true Brazuca; Story: Its going in a surprising direction and the pace jusssst hits the spot for me; So give it a try. Review pros Br: Uma história onde um br segue no caminho de um verdadeiro comedor de casadas.

The paragraphs are pretty large, maybe try spacing them out a little. Other than that, it's quite the novel concept and fun.

When he meets Sasori he can scold him in a sanctimonious way. " I, your Grandfather, don't aprove of playing with dolls! "

Tap the granny, Chiyo

This doesn't make any sense, he would be viewed more favorably in a regular school, not the other way around, mental gymnastics this brainded are a chore to read.

If this is Tet from NGNL, he is omniscient and omnipotent technically(kinda?), he just doesn't like using his powers to see the future and enforce causality to win. He is pretty bored of being practically all powerful, so he just wings it and where it goes most of the time.

Living in a cultivation world would be hell lol. Everyone is extremely retarded, even the godlike beings, you can only depend on luck, cause at any time some young master or jade like beauty can fuck things up for no reason🤣

That's just common sense you know haha

Cringe

Yeah it confusing Draig with Akatosh children( Dovah) is stupid, they are fragments of time itself Draig is just a lizard, one born from chaos and power, but a lizard.

Mundus is not actually a planet bound by entrophy, its a more like a realm, like those xianxia stories, and its existence is cyclic, with kalpas. So its not gonna turn to ash, Alduin is suposed to destroy it, and then its remade diferently later.

Daedra are a coalescence of higher dimensional hyper angles, the forms that can be perceived by lesser creatures are just that, forms. Why is it posing as a hot chick, it is an abstract being lol.

Unless the villains(antagonists) suffer major powercreep, The tension in this story is done. There is no need for any supporting cast, Gary Stu "cool and calculating" gamer loser over here can solve everything by himself and get whatever he wants anytime! Lol what a good progression and development, your other stories at least did not have some garbage gamer-gacha abomination giving everything on a silver platter and trivializing the entire setting.

This guy Gary Stu levels are only going up it seems sigh...

Read Irl Hindu mythology, some Hindu characters are even more overpowered than in fiction. Could put some of them in dragonball and they would kick ass even in super. Dxd hindu gods are nerfed and Shiva could still bitchslap every other god solo, other than Big G. Tldr, Celtic pantheon is weak sauce.

Lol, unless you change the lore of DXD Shiva can solo all the Celtic pantheon while sleepwalking, not even a contest.

Lol Jasmine is rally being a homie here 🤣

His taste in waifus is improving, Mash and Rider are 10/10, Olga is garbage though, lame imitator of Rin.