CRAZY GOOD!!!

Danger* changing*

This is expected from the author…suspense curiosity dander…without hanging the pace it should go

I’ not saying necessarily talking of leveling up but him getting a lil more creative with his abilities as time go and bam a big one…something along those lines

I completely understand bout pacing but there should be bits and pieces along the way to keep constant engagement in the story

I‘m sorry I have to say this now..it’s sooo slooow…i might as well with a couple months before anything meaningful happens

A comic would be great for this novel

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Amazing read…this is one of the most complete and satisfying stories I’ve read…its among my small list of favorites..u will Not be disappointed