What’s this about ‘golden finger’? I’m seeing it more often than before.

They should use the fur

This has to be the 100 reference.

Should use the wording of numbers like “four”

He probably has the best foundation given to him than anyone else, but I hope he will do things that will make himself different. He needs his own identity.

In fact, he is by no means a logical person. It’s pretty far along the way to find out the criteria for being reincarnated. I don’t know if it’s your English, but I have no idea what’s your point.

I hope his personality changes. Anger for minor things doesn’t fit him well. Did the pain from the fruit and fire make him like this? I know he is 14 years old, but he was better in the beginning of the story. Ignored the bullies’ taunts and was also smart because he only relied on himself back then.

I think the author either Is hinting about his soul or it’s just a gut feeling. The way the author worded it makes it seem less like a metaphor it’s supposed to be. “Something tells me that this game will be different” sounds better.

Today is present, so owns*

Just hope the chapters would be reasonably lenghty and that it would get the point. Don’t want things dragged out unnecessarily.