so is he going to hide his power for ever from everyone, if so then I'm out.

you are on point. the initial concept is great but from the incident you mentioned (fighting arena part) story went downhill. it is too generic and cliché.

generic and cliché.

so does he want to stay inconspicuous or not?? why is he overperforming here? why keep hiding your cultivation too much to the point it's so far beneath everyone that you automatically stand out for no reason??

no, what's the name of OG book? is it available here?

Exactly!! Devine father doesn't care about what's between your legs, they are all nutrition for him and his children.

This is written by a child write?? The logic is non existent in this, also power system in this is somewhat questionable. but great concept though.

Ling Chen is a true villan, I love it. all those novels claiming the Villanous MC tag should learn from this.

Ling Chen is a true villan, I love it. all those novels claiming the Villanous MC tag should learn from this.

you can find this in Mtl with the same name.

This is too cliché at this point. so am dropping it. Good luck to the author though.

MC for someone who comes from our world is somewhat dumb, not creative enough.

I had never felt bad for a villian in a xianxia but this song dude, I truly feel bad for the guy😂😂😂

Author keeps doing it this early on imagine how much he will mess up in the later stages.

At the beginning it's said he was bronze 8 stars, afterwards it's mentioned he advanced to bronze 7 stars, now he's bronze 8 stars again?

author is being too inconsistent, within a few chapters he can't keep track of things this is Turing out to be a disappointment.

😂😂 exactly!! no need to fight fair winner is the king loser dies. That's all!!!

😂😂 idots don't know the moment you enter Akash world everything about you will be known sending a spy is evquilent to telling them all about your self Devine Father ling about to suck them dry.

Nice always wondered how we would meet little mei, couldn't have thought a better way my self.

The story is well written but just not for me. As some one who enjoys OP MC'S didn't enjoy the Mc of this novel one bit he was disappointing and too pompous for my liking and he talks too much. It degrades his character. well good luck to the Author though.It was a good try.