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daoist7nthheaven3dCommentedYYYYYYEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS
And last but not least, Dragon Ball.[1]- daoist7nthheaven8dCommented
Yes, the battle was great, the skill they showed in that one fight could boggle the mind, shame it was so great it could not be described in words and had to be left out completely.
Thor was half stuffing his face full of the hearty food in front of him while glancing up with a smile every once in a while. "Mother, have no fear! Aerion is practically born for battle!" He shouted with a smile on his face. - daoist7nthheaven8dCommented
Was and he seemed to have been switched in that last line
Aerion…well simply put Aerion still didn't know what had happened, why was he in Asgard, what universe he was even in? - daoist7nthheaven8dCommented
Bros definitely the favorite child
"Rhaemon," she murmured, her voice thick with emotion. "My precious Rhaemon. You are truly blessed." - daoist7nthheaven12dCommented
Magic highschool?💀
Magic high school, Awakening Temple. - daoist7nthheaven16dCommented
Spidey sense didn’t warn him of the mc?
That guy, Peter Parker, had naturally atracted my attention when he managed to jumped high enough to avoid the car. - daoist7nthheaven18dCommented
Nah, slug would most definitely assume they were here for the dragon balls. They knew of namik before but never acted untill now? The dragon balls would be the most obvious incentive from his perspective.
"If the ship is destroyed, our goal and the Dragon Ball are lost. The same risk applies if it's lost in space. Bringing it into a battlefield is too risky unless it remains securely by your side. However, tucking so many under your arm is hardly ideal. Moreover, Slug may not even be aware that we're after the Dragon Balls, assuming instead that our aim is genocide. We also can't guarantee the Dragon Balls will retain their power if they leave the planet. Additionally—" - daoist7nthheaven18dReplied to NexIuz
I get it, I just found it funny
"That is surprisingly common among primitives..." I commented with a shake of my head, no way would the Empire ever fall to such self-destructive behaviour. - daoist7nthheaven18dCommented
That first sentence was confusing as hell😭
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Seems good but you should get someone to proofread or put it through an editor for the grammer mistakes. They’re small but over the course of several chapter it makes it seem like the writing is of lower quality then it is
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Is that why you included the trade organization? Is frieza an actual thing?
Would he be the same had he been sent to Planet Qilongga? Planet Namek? Planet Uros? - daoist7nthheaven18dCommented
I wonder, you said he was as large as Superman, how large is that exactly because he’s 15 right? It makes sense with his super elite genes but I’m wondering if he’ll get even bigger?
I admit, I liked his style—especially the black shades and Viltrumite-esq mustache. - daoist7nthheaven18dReplied to Irebornintheboys
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Yeah those things would definitely die due to either Superman or Scions immune system
They were based on tiny microoranisms constantly emitted by Killgrave's body that served to parasitize the victim through their nervous system. - daoist7nthheaven18dCommented
wait, you said demon god. Was it trigon?
We were sure that we could deal with the demonic backlash, we knew it would happen, but we weren't worried about it. - daoist7nthheaven18dCommented
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"Y-You became Superman because of loss...?" Garfield seemed to think about that statement for a bit as he glanced at his deceased mother. "Does...does having a dead mom give you superpowers—OW!" - daoist7nthheaven18dReplied to Tenzing_Choeying_5139
He’s not dumb, but I don’t think he’s that smart😭
...I wonder if that much Solar Radiation would make him as strong as Father...probably not, right? Gods, I hope not.