Overall i like the story. Unlike other people though im not gonna post a 5 star rating just because they are too lazy to actually go in depth in their review. Ive seen gramatical errors here and there but nothing terrible. maybe put it through grammarly So it can fix those and you dont have to manually look, i like the story but feels kind of like a dead end. overall id give it a 4/5

Impossible to read Look into getting an editor or using grammarly Idk why thats so hard for most people on this site. i wont read this again until it has better grammar

One of the best if not the best novel i have read on this website and i have a collection of almost 400 novels in my library AKA Thumbs up from me