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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision4d
    Commented

    OOOHHH Moon princess is his sister..... But the corruption part.... I hope isn't anything sexual....

    Ch 262 Do You Still Wish To Stay Here?
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    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision4d
    Commented

    BRAVO BRAVO TAKE A BOW ARC WELL WRITTEN!!!!!!!

    Ch 240 The Beacon Of Hope
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    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision5d
    Commented

    I LOVE THIS STORY!!! MUUUHHHAHAHAHAHA

    Ch 170 The Laughter Of Two Third-Rate Villains
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    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision6d
    Commented

    EVEN MY JAW DROPPED WHEN HE DISREPECTED THE GENERAL

    Ch 161 You’re Not As Dumb As You Look
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    Fantasy · Elyon
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision8d
    Commented

    like just write the dog out at this point

    "I'm sorry, Pal, I can't take you on this one."
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision17d
    Commented

    ok now this story has not progressed for about 60 chapters now. that literally a whole book worth of chapters are you milking us as readers? this is to many fillers episodes and not enough action.

    Ch 168 Words Of A Reckless Brat Locked In A Dungeon Cell
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision17d
    Commented

    this ranking system is the only thing about this story which will never pan out as worth it or understandable compared to other lite novels.

    Ch 155 Business Of The Day [part 1]
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision17d
    Commented

    this ranking system is the only thing about this story which will never pan out as worth it or understandable compared to other lite novels.

    "So Ellis, do you think a devil-level, hellion rank can defeat an apex-level, savage rank?"
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision17d
    Commented

    Hey these last few chapters were actually good they had character building and explained things further. Plus some foreshadowing for the future

    Ch 147 Cleaning Up Brimfield Forest [part 1]
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision18d
    Commented

    The grammar isn't complex it's just comes off as over explained I think I more simple detailed writing allows time for the reader to not have to over think.

    Ch 126 The Situation As It Might Be
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision18d
    Commented

    NO LOVE FOR THIS DOG AT ALL

    'Ah, well. I'll fetch him next time I visit the capital.'
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision18d
    Commented

    I may complain but I like the story overrall like this whole being on the monster side arc is very different I like it. I just would have like a braver indiviual who had a life of dark struggle in his past like too be the main character and not a coward. You've already died once stop being so scared...

    Ch 95 The Castle Lord [part 3]
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision18d
    Commented

    Maybe I missed something I doubt it be when did the knowledge is clone ran on any type of energy if that's the case how did it stay detached when he was first captured?

    'Besides, I might run out of essence…'
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision19d
    Commented

    it's like like this one why is it needed get it already focus on telling the story. Not extra ways to explain what was already explained in even more details we don't need!!!

    Of course, easy was not what Northern was looking for. He had thought about this very well.
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision19d
    Replied to ItsBeru

    Starting to think sense is not what this story is made out of my friend.

    Talent Fragments: [978/1000]
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision19d
    Commented

    I'm really starting to struggle with reading all this over explaining and details this takes the enjoyment out of the story on top of the fact I have to read this character talking to himself and having conversations with himself instead of just being told a story about how he feels and what he's doing.... I'm a start skipping chapters because he also repeats himself alot

    Ch 71 Shelter Alas!
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision19d
    Commented

    You know I'm loving this build up and the way he is team monster.... I don't think I want him to return to humanity...

    Ch 51 Cocky Bastard [part 2]
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision20d
    Commented

    You could literally end the story right here...and do a spin off

    Ch 27 What is Fear?
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    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision20d
    Commented

    AAAWWWW Northern is a reincarnated loser uuugghhhh

    Ch 20 Nonsense Deceit
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    I Can Copy And Evolve Talents
    Fantasy · RighteousFilth
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  • tdubvision
    tdubvision1mth
    Commented

    OK these useless comments are not being honest is anyone else notcing these grave errors that make the story hard to follow at time? is this a mess up in translation?

    Ch 77 Morbid and Crazy Kylie
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    Reborn As a Goblin With Simulation System
    Fantasy · Rqmk
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