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Whiskeyjackdaniel2dCommentedFOLLOW*
"I HAVE SAID ON THIS SUBJECT." The powerful god pilot said. "I DO NOT AGREE WITH YOUR STRATEGY. FURIA'S DOMAIN MAY NOT FIT HER WELL AT THE MOMENT, BUT SHE IS STILL A FIRE ELEMENTAL. THERE IS GREAT MEANING IN THAT. HER COMMAND OVER FIRE SHOULD ALREADY ENABLE HER TO COMMAND THE GREATER RUNES THAT YOU OBSESS OVER. MUCH LIKE THE PHOENIX, SHE DOES NOT NEED TO PUT ANY DELIBERATE EFFORT TO CONSTRUCT THESE RUNES. THE CREATOR OF THE FIRE SCROLL HAS ALREADY SUPPLIED HER WITH THE RIGHT ABILITIES. ALL SHE NEEDS TO DO IS TO LEVERAGE HER WILL TO DOMINATE THE POWER OF FIRE, AND EVERYTHING WILL AUTOMATICALLY FULLOW SUIT."- Whiskeyjackdaniel15dCommentedCh 5858 Subjugation Comes
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I am not surprised as the MTA also likes to experiment with their potentates.
"A- and higher. We only employ the best for our experimental organic AI core array." - Whiskeyjackdaniel23dCommentedMere first-class suits of combat armor could not compare to the bulky and intimidating black armors worn by the Dread Marines.
- Whiskeyjackdaniel1mthCommentedCh 5781 The Third Way
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No mean No, Gloriana. You ain't spending a dime on this. Get your own monies.
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He should just make Gloriana pay her debts.
Ves definitely saw the wisdom in this approach. He always wanted to attend one of these mysterious grand auctions that he only recently became qualified to attend. The first dividend payments from Isthmus Manufacturing was also about to come in, and even if he had to pay back the large debt accrued by his wife, the income was still generous. - Whiskeyjackdaniel2mthCommented"The Genlock Cell is the harbinger of change!"
- Whiskeyjackdaniel2mthCommentedVes crossed his arms. "Besides, there is another major fault to your mech design. It is too cold and inhuman! I highly suggest that it should mimic the human process of procreation more closely!"
- Whiskeyjackdaniel4mthCommented
Typo. It says Plasewater. It should say Phasewater.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Whiskeyjackdaniel5mthCommented"Ah, I almost forgot to mention that I will be borrowing the help of one of my 'design spirits' for this fabrication run. Vulcan has recently matured to the point where I can borrow his insights and skill in craftsmanship more extensively than before. I will be trying this out for the first time, so do not be surprised if I appear a bit different than usual."
- Whiskeyjackdaniel10mthCommented
I have an issue with the use term military grade in this novel. Military grade is mostly a marketing ploy and doesn't necessarily mean it is the best. Most of the time it is the most cost-effective product out there. It wouldn't always have the top-of-the-line materials. This novel make it seem that military grade means like better than the market.
Although the Living Mech Corporation did not really sell any real military-grade mechs at this time, its machines were still incredibly attractive to the large number of paramilitary units that had signed on to fight for Davute. - Whiskeyjackdaniel11mthReplied to Galanar
Interesting. Why go with the accumulation? Not that it's a bad thing, it's just on the majority of the books here.
Body Cleansing Lvl1: You have done your first body cleansing mana purge. Mana flows more easily into you and it is purer. Mana capacity +50, Spell power +10%, HP +50. - Whiskeyjackdaniel11mthCommented
It's the same accumulation thing that I keep seeing on almost every novel. Is this really a staple for Chinese novels?
Body Cleansing Lvl1: You have done your first body cleansing mana purge. Mana flows more easily into you and it is purer. Mana capacity +50, Spell power +10%, HP +50. - Whiskeyjackdaniel11mthPosted
This is an epic novel. Now, I'm going to explain what I don't like about this novel. It has a lot of bloat chapters. Author tends to explain the same thing over and over again. He would explain in this one chapter, only for him to explain it again in the future chapters. And if you think you are done with it, you would see the same exact topic explained again in the thousandth or so chapter. Mind you this is almost 5K chapters. If you've watch Naruto, it has fillers, this one has a ton of them. It's like watching Slam Dunk waiting for the ball to fall into the net, but while that is happening the author would insert some side story. It can drag on forever. Many times I have spent money just to read the advance chapters, but no story progression, a lot of fillers though. Despite all of that this is still one of the best novels I've seen in this app. The characters are interesting. The main character is an anti-hero that is at least not overpowered. Too many novels where the MC becomes this badass character that everyone worships. The story can drag on, but this novel has so much potential. The author could probably even create side novels about other people because how massive is the world building. I did see him dropping a few potential story lines that I felt could have worked. For the characters, there are a lot of characters, some you'd probably like, some don't. A few characters seem to have the same plot armors as the main character, but I'll give it a pass. If there is one wish that I'd like to happen is that the author must complete this without rushing the ending. Seriously, I have read multiple books in this app that are really good, but then it ended too soon. Imagine the story has built this system where the character levels up. It takes a long time for the character to reach a certain level, and then because the author wanted to finish the book the last few progress would be like just a few chapters. Anyway, you guys should definitely read this book.
- Whiskeyjackdaniel1yrCommentedCh 4662 The Gray Lady
- Whiskeyjackdaniel1yrCommentedThe power of teamwork combined with the power of synergy could produce astonishing results!
- Whiskeyjackdaniel1yrCommented"I believe our clan already has that area covered, sir."