Alesinain
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Alesinain16hCommentedlast* for one week and one day
As for Ryka, her remark wasn't so far off the truth. Solus had managed to make the sweets bought from the Traveling Tavern for one week and one day. It had taken her sheer willpower but at least she could say they had lasted more than a week.- Alesinain16hCommented
pick up*
"Did you pick anything useful with your Tiamat eyes, Lith?" Strider believed that Lith's tracking skills stemmed from a bloodline ability, not Menadion's masterpiece. - Alesinain7dReplied to Campino_41
I get that, but last I checked husband is a dude
Once she was done eating, Quylla took care of showing off her husband and all the attention with which she had showered her. - Alesinain7dCommented
she showered her with attention? replace either she with he or her with him and then it'll make more sense
Once she was done eating, Quylla took care of showing off her husband and all the attention with which she had showered her. - Alesinain10dCommented
circulate*
"Sorry." Lith apologized. "Now, before taking your share of Life Maelstrom, I want you to focus. Don't send it to your yellow eye. Just circulated it through your bodies like you did with Ryla's abilities." - Alesinain11dCommented
not much longer* or not long
"Not much." Feela the Behemoth, Aren's Garlener counterpart, said. "Our local mines can provide the raw materials for the new seal and the transoceanic Gates will give us the rest." - Alesinain13dCommented
these kinds of wounds*
'I don't care. I can take this kind of wounds. My Divine Right array gives me more mana than the repairs will take. Also, by bathing in the underground world energy, I can recover much more quickly than I would by standing on my feet. - Alesinain13dCommented
comma after master.
None of those abilities came from the power core of the tower. Menadion had built it to assist her and give her the means she needed to exceed her limits. Unlike a cursed object, without its master the tower was just an elegant pile of stones. - Alesinain16dReplied to WarStrider72
niblings is correct. it's the term for nieces and nephews
"I'm sorry, but after our return from Jiera, living with your family made me understand how precious you are to me. Seeing Lith with Elysia and realizing how much your niblings look up to him, made me more than envious. - Alesinain16dCommented
if, in the future, she*. commas here are helpful
"I know that she did terrible things in the past, but if in the future she merges her life forces like I did and bears children, do they deserve your wrath as well?" - Alesinain16dCommented
needless* to say
"Useless to say, my lair endured more fires than a forest during a dry summer. I had to spend almost ten gold coins to replace everything he destroyed before I knocked some sense into him." - Alesinain19dCommented
while avoiding the risk*
"No. You see, this place is indeed barren, but the volcanic ashes are a great fertilizer. It's because of them that the nearby lands can be cultivated all year around or risk of soil depletion." Valtak said. - Alesinain19dCommented
father* of fire
"Get on my back, hatchlings. It will be quicker." The Fathe of Fire ignored the human woman pleading with her son to become a scholar and not endanger his life. "We have a long day ahead of us." - Alesinain24dCommented
how many "a"s are in his name, one or two. previous mention has 2
No matter how Elina despised the man, every compliment to Surin was well received. Also, if Kaz tried something funny, the Doomslayer crib would turn him into ashen confetti. - Alesinain25dCommented
haven't had*
"It's really good." The Phoenix of Darkness begrudgingly admitted. "I didn't have my ass kicked so hard since my last battle with Aylen. I'm not going to lie, your use of Silverwing's Annihilation was really creative and I'm damn happy we restricted the use of Blade Spells. - Alesinain1mthCommented
advise*, not advice.
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if I'm right*, he lied
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reliving* not relieving
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you kami? something seems to be missing
"Because I could see that deep, deep, deep down she is as beautiful on the inside as she is on the outside." Lith replied. "Also, you Kami is a great and wise woman." - Alesinain1mthCommented
aptitude*
"Think about it, dear." Jirni assumed the slow, calm lecturing tone she used with small children. "You belong to a powerful magical bloodline. Elysia has already shown her attitude toward magic in the form of the six streaks in her hair.