Great writing quality. The author understands how to write characters and world settings. The story is interesting and can entertain its audience. However, there is one flaw that will stop me from reading this story. Well, I say a flaw but to others it might not be. I think the story is progressing way too slow. I've read up to the locked chapters and feel like there has been little to almost no progress. I think what's been written in the 80+ something chapters could have been written in 40. Nonetheless, it's still a great story and hope the author continues to do what they enjoy.

How do people resd this shit? I'm 240 chapters in and the retarded Mc is still hiding his identity. He's reached the 3rd grade and still doesn't want to reveal his identity. Not only that, the people at his level can already tell he's using a skin mask. At this point the author STILL refuses to reveal his identity and gives him another ability to hide his fucking identity. Like I sincerely doubt he will jot show his identity until the end of the series. Dropped.

Oh, well too bad then kekw.

I originally wanted to write this without a system too. However, systems within novel heavily reduce the burden for authors. It also helps remove some plot holes. I also wanted to add elements from other animes so system makes it easier to introduce.

If he doesn't know how to fight how can he be better than any ninja. Sure he'll be able to fight citizens easily but they don't know how to fight either.

It's locked. It literally does nothing for him.

Biased review kekw. Except I won't lie about my terrible updating consistency. d dnxnxjfmfmfmfmfmfmfmfmfmfkckfkrkrnrndmdmrmrmrmrmrmrmrm

I haven't read that yet so I can't really say anything. But, I will considering using the nara bloodline. I'm gonna be completely, honest I'm making the story up as I go chapter by chapter and completely forfot about the nara bloodline.

It depends on how long this series goes.

sorry i cant understand you

Synopsis says about 1 or 2 people per world

few hours, maybe more I'm kinda tired.

He forgot xD

Ngl, I wanted to changed the name ONLY for the fact that I used the same name for every novel I've written. But, I really don't agree with what you've said. A multitude of animes, mangas and fanfictions a like use names outside of japenese-cultured names.

I've already gotten idea for what I want to do. Besides, the idea of going to Orochimaru goes against Mc's nature per what I've written.

This came out a little wrong. Should be more of an anime like hit where nothing serious happens. Pure comedy sequence.

Cliff Hanger bruh

so it fixes at about maybe 70-80

literally*

Its pretty good. However, at around chapter 50 the author broke his space bar? laterally every other word islikethis or something likethisanditmakes it unbearable to read. See my point?