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TheOne81mthCommentedThis doesn't make sense. Are they part of the empire or not? Is it the empire that is after him, or the Royal Army? If it is the empire, then why does the Royal Army care if another faction knows? If it is the Royal Army, why would his family stay in the Royal Army's territory?
Because the Conclave mainly dealt with manpower services, networking, and trading, they had an agreement with the Ylfaen Empire that they would only deal with their business and would not meddle with any crusade the empire would initiate. In return, the empire would also not interfere with their business. It also meant that they had no control of the information circulating within the Conclave's networking.- TheOne87mthCommented
That's like 40 years worth of spirit stones. Too much...
There was also another way to earn spirit stones that was to participate in the outer sect arena. Every summer after new disciples are expected there will be an outer sect arena tournament where outer sect yellow robed disciples will participate. The first place would receive staggering 500 spirit stones, a foundation establishment pill, two new techniques . - TheOne81yrCommented
But when he actually does something good and people see that he is strong, they might wonder if it is true. Having people remember you isn't the brightest idea.
"I would let you know… my Appraisal was, uh, it was "glorious"! Yes, glorious. And the Aspect I acquired was of the Divine rank." - TheOne81yrCommented
What is the point of explaining this? He can do this without the flaw. The only way this would come into play is if someone knew his flaw and believed whatever he said based on that. Otherwise, there is no point in saying this. It is standard for everyone.
Thus, two truthful statements, when put together, created an effect akin to a lie. - TheOne81yrCommented
Why does he have to answer? Saying nothing or no comment isn't a lie. What, he has to answer every question someone asks him?
Because he could not lie, and all of these excited youths, regardless of their clothes, gender and looks, wanted to do one thing. - TheOne81yrReplied to shashank_panthri
I think made him to be stupid. Can't think. So he wouldn't be able to say who injured him.
It was a real shit storm. It was all over the news that President Jo's last son had been turned into an invalid. It was on the lips of every media outlet. The president had vowed to crush whoever was responsible. According to the press, he even hired a special team of mixed-bloods to investigate secretly. - TheOne81yrCommented
So guns don't work, but a bow does? Yeah right, there has to be something special about it.
They were a group of people who claimed that abilities were a blight upon humanity and instead opted to use weapons. However, they were very rare and Quinn had never met anyone who belonged in the faction in his life. He had merely heard stories about them. - TheOne81yrCommented
How is he mysterious? He is strong but has bad roots. And he smells
A seed of interest in her mind is planted as she wants to know more about this mysterious youth. - TheOne81yrCommented
He doesn't know who you are, so how can he be different?
Being born in an imperial family and loved by her father extensively. Many can't even wait to flock toward her to obtain her favor but he's the opposite. - TheOne81yrCommentedCh 7 Qiu Lan
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I thought avg was 2 stars? How is that a bad joke?
His soul-awakening rating was also a bad joke. - TheOne81yrCommented
He is not getting favors from them. His mom was killed because of them, and they threw him out. He got severance pay, and that's it. What he is getting from them, is what his mom earned.
Another thing Jason could do was to ask the Cerus family for help, so he could reveal that his vision had returned without worries. But, he didn't want to do that, as he had already received many favors from the family and he didn't like adding more to his guilt of relying on others. - TheOne82yrCommented
He is 5 years old...
Du Chan was not that handsome. He had sharp dark eyes and silky medium black hair that made him somewhat above average in terms of beauty. - TheOne82yrCommented
A cold heart such as his...
Lucius observed the new dimension that he was reaching and saw something which he could only describe as 'Heaven'. A scenery of impeccable beauty and serenity, such that even a cold heart such as was getting entranced by it. - TheOne82yrCommented
So is this like a diary? Is he talking to us, the readers?
I completed the circle but left only one small line of it which will serve to close the circuit. That line I wrote in regular ink that can be removed with a splash of water, for reasons that I will explain later. - TheOne82yrCommented
Yeah, a little too righteous. I hate when MCs try to put their values on other people. You don't know their life nor their problems. Just because someone looks at appearance first, doesn't mean there will be no love in the future. It is an arranged marriage anyway.
Once I had my hood back on I said, "Physical appearance isn't more than eye candy, it will one day go away. The scar on your daughter's face isn't something that will devalue her or lessen her value. If the prince is naïve and shallow enough to disregard your daughter due to a simple scar, then you're better off not marrying her to him." I said as I stood up.