First time writing a book, looking forward to see how it develops 👍
Great fanfic and absolutely love your work and the way you use Luke's abilities as superman is great! Though I might be wrong, but do you know when he is going to level up from lv2 to lv3, and how long he must wait to get stronger? Keep up the great work!
I never said you did, however not mentioning that it isn't yours can create a misconception that's all. Not throwing you under the bus here. Good luck.
Then you can't just edit the chapters and publish it without the author's permission. It must require the approval from the person who made the fanfic. Moreover, it must be mentioned within your description that this work isn't yours and that you're purely publishing it for editorial purposes. Otherwise, you're editing is well done.
Wait I'm confused how's kurama still stronger than naruto even after the end of the 4th Shinobi war? True kurama is strong but not to the point where naruto can never defeat especially if naruto is the next sage of six paths according to this ff. Well then again if that's how the author is willing to depict then I have no qualms about it. It would be best to specify how kurama is stronger. Thanks.
He was cursed by Parasuram that whenever he needs his knowledge the most, he shall forget it all. He was also cursed that his chariot will give up on him and stuff. Instead of the mahabharatha it was interesting to see it being called from the nasuverse haha
The premise is good and the characters are well described and written. I liked the flow of conversation between Emma and others to be quite smooth. I wish you the best on your book author 👍
Though thr premise was short, it was interesting and the characters are well described. Your writing is very good and the characters emotions are described well. Good job! 👍
The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I wish you the best on your book author and look forward to more. 👍
The premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book author 👍
Hey I really like the story and how the main character goes back in time to redo his chances. I look forward to seeing how you develop your story and I wish you the best on your book! 👍