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Calling the writting bad is an understatement, it's barely readable. Difficult to immerse yourself in the story due to gramar mistakes, crappy syntax, poor vocabulary, etc. Imagine reading a story that goes like this "I go in the house. I eat an apple. I leave the house. I kill bad man #1. Bad man falls on the ground. I take his money. I buy big mac with bad man's money. I laugh because I'm happy." Obviously this is an exaggeration but its not that far off. Story wise? Very generic. Characters? Bland due to poor writing, lack of development, lack of description. I get it, its supposed to be a webnovel but pls focus more on the quality rather than the quantity. Take your time to write a good story and revise your work until you're certain you've done your best.
Isn't he just pointing out the obvious?