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  • Blobt
    Blobt8mth
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    Calling the writting bad is an understatement, it's barely readable. Difficult to immerse yourself in the story due to gramar mistakes, crappy syntax, poor vocabulary, etc. Imagine reading a story that goes like this "I go in the house. I eat an apple. I leave the house. I kill bad man #1. Bad man falls on the ground. I take his money. I buy big mac with bad man's money. I laugh because I'm happy." Obviously this is an exaggeration but its not that far off. Story wise? Very generic. Characters? Bland due to poor writing, lack of development, lack of description. I get it, its supposed to be a webnovel but pls focus more on the quality rather than the quantity. Take your time to write a good story and revise your work until you're certain you've done your best.

    Supremacy Games
    Sci-fi · MidGard
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  • Blobt
    Blobt1yr
    Commented

    It seems like this village is being used as a breeding ground for spawns pf the outer deities. Maybe theyre trying to gain foothold in their world.

    Ch 67 Evil Spells
    Lord of Mysteries 2: Circle of Inevitability
    Fantasy · Cuttlefish That Loves Diving
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  • Blobt
    Blobt1yr
    Commented

    Isn't he just pointing out the obvious?

    "The little devil is skilled at stirring up the doubt in our hearts. We don’t need to waste time talking… we just need to kill him!"
    Tales of Herding Gods
    Eastern · Zhai Zhu
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  • Blobt
    Blobt2yr
    Commented

    hahhhah thanks for the chapter!!!

    Ch 42 Chapter 42 : Fujin Vs Hoka
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Blobt
    Blobt3yr
    Commented

    My favorite chapter in terms of writing style and content! :D loved it!

    Ch 37 Chapter 37 : Sparring with Sensei
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Blobt
    Blobt3yr
    Commented

    I'd love to see him get into ambu and act as a hidden faced OP ninja (who is in fact only 10-12 years old)

    Ch 30 Chapter 30 : Combat Practice (2)
    Naruto : The Wind Calamity
    Fantasy · Devil_Hex
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  • Blobt
    Blobt3yr
    Commented

    "... I'll be releasing 2 more either on Friday/Saturday this week..." Never to be seen again...

    Ch 58 Wolf and Ramen
    Shinobi Fenrir
    Action · Lain_Walker
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