I've read so many mha fanfics that I've already memorized what happens next, I like it when they add stories outside of the academy or change certain things from canon, it makes it more original. Thanks for the chapter.

Okay, I read about 10 chapters, and that's really bad and I'll tell you why. The writing lacks emotion, Izuku is constantly defeated in this story and my reaction is: ok, when will the cool part come? Everything is a bit robotic, the monologues and internal dialogues are boring and superficial. The writing is bad, with a lack of punctuation and no "" in the dialogue, I can only guess what a line is or isn't and who it belongs to. There are a lot of flashabcaks that don't interest me. The characters are evil for no apparent reason, like, All Might didn't have a quirk so he would never neglect someone without a quirk, I would even accept him being an absent father, you know? Inko too, in the beginning it was clear that she loved and cared for Izuku and then she just neglected him for no apparent reason? I know that a villain needs a tragic past but you need to know how to do that. Unless someone says that some kind of invisibility quirk was cast on Izuku, I wouldn't believe any kind of explanation. Anyway, I don't want to be an idiot, I'm just doing an honest review of what I found and raising points that can be improved in the future, I didn't get very far in this fanfic so I don't know if the writing has improved or anything, but if it has, the author should review the beginning of the story.

This doesn't make any sense, it doesn't match the characters' personalities, and even though it's different from the original, the story itself contradicts itself by showing that the twin brother and mother loved Izuku.

Whenever I see descriptions of Shoto using his flames, only one thing comes to mind: didn't the clothes burn? Is he fighting naked?

But Shoto has helped Bakugou twice before, so technically Bakugou is still in debt.

I imagine Shigaraki playing stardew valley.

My God, it's been 3 years.

Thank you, if you hadn't explained it, my curiosity would have reached such a level that I would have researched this, and that would be very nerdy of me.

I don't know enough about biology to say anything, but is it normal for rapid warming to generate storms and lightning? Or should I dismiss this as anime logic?

That's one of the clichés I like, going against destiny.

I thought Shoto liked the feeling of overcoming himself by fighting strong people and learning from them.

Without anecdotes, my life is largely unchanging and without major events, I don't know if that's good or bad.

Haha was she scared? Stripping down to your underwear in the middle of the woods seems a little ridiculous, but I never would have figured it out on my own.

Will her husband show up?

Ah, I thought it had something to do with the scar, but it didn't make sense because the scar was healed. It was really very subtle. Actually, I think I already said this, but I really like the moments where we can see Shoto's thought process during psychological treatment.

She didn't understand and I didn't understand either.

Maybe, but that makes things more interesting.

I read a romance fanfic that was so well written that when I rewatched the original series, I tried to connect normal actions that people would do as if it were a secret crush the characters had for each other.

I found the description of the environment confusing, I can't say but I couldn't imagine the scene in the car clearly. I also don't understand if Kenzei has super speed and can jump from building to building or if he shot the man on top of the building.

What caught my attention in MHA was the quirks, the concept of a society where everyone has super powers, laws and regulations imposed on these powers. That's why, even though I no longer follow the anime, I continue reading fanfics about mha, it's a world with many ideas to explore that doesn't seem to have been well used. Oh, and also, it reminds me of Charlotte...