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Skeletal_Gnoll

Skeletal_Gnoll

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2019-07-26 JoinedGlobal
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll1yr
    Commented

    hate when MCs get mutilated.

    Ch 10 Mutate [2]
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    Void Evolution System
    Fantasy · Crocs_is_Dead
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Commented

    drop sword and magic stories as a rule when the MC starts messing with guns. not you, just a personal thing. I dont read about sorcery and escape reality just to hear about guns, its boring. best of luck, author.

    Ch 22 Clue
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    Fire Mage
    Fantasy · Ak02
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Commented

    I see, you picked a name merely one chapter after I got impatient and commented. fair play author, I rescind my needless complaint.

    Ch 9 Edhen World
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    Fire Mage
    Fantasy · Ak02
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Commented

    pick a name. its getting annoying dude.

    Ch 8 Execution
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    Fire Mage
    Fantasy · Ak02
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Replied to Ak02

    so you wrote yourself into a corner before chapter 10? at the very least, Darkness mage should cost the same or less exp, that way readers dont feel scammed about the MC selling his potential short for convenience.

    Ch 7 Apprentice Fire Mage
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    Fire Mage
    Fantasy · Ak02
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Posted

    tried really hard to make it past the first chapter. really, I did. the grammar made my eyes bleed and bled, due to inability to stick to present or past tense, and the blonde man with the katana and many wives made me cringe so hard that my father felt it. along with mc's inability to draw even the simplest only conclusions and the never ending train if tropes running their own train on my eyes, I couldn't make it. OP, please download grammar.ly or MS word with spell check, please. your product would be infinitely better even without proof reading.

    altalt
    The Legacy System
    Fantasy · crazy_immortal
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Commented

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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Commented

    Bye Felicia!

    Everyone else obviously had huge objections to Xiao Lin's role as acting monitor. Dozens of people in the group roasted him enthusiastically on the screen until Xiao Lin calmly banned all the members. Everything immediately fell silent.
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Replied to Unruh_

    I think Intelligence should have been swapped out for Spirit or another similar magic related stat. seems to correlate with magical aptitude far more than actual intelligence

    Ch 7 Replicate
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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  • Skeletal_Gnoll
    Skeletal_Gnoll2yr
    Replied to DarkestOne

    what Necrom said. though I'd try and leverage a later payment of some of the credits or whatever they will earn if they are allowed to keep the weapon. whereas he cannot use the weapon, he could still escape with it and take the minimum reward. the girl who is best in class is obviously vying for the bonus tasks and I'd try and get a slice of the pie in exchange for later benifits. either way though, I dont think an F grade wand could be considered a powerful weapon at the end of the day.

    Ch 3 Admission Test
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    Elite Mages' Academy
    Sci-fi · The Final Fool
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