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simplevoid2yrCommentedWhy do so many defend the third hokage was a bad leader he let so many things slide because of past feelings or hoping and believing in the better. He could have lessened the tensions in the uchiha but just keep watching. Not to mention not keeping the elders in check
Then, when he saw Minato getting out of his grasp instead of fighting the Kyubbi himself he let him die and Naruto the son of hero grew up under the ridicule of everyone and his grandson had a Jonin as his lackey.- simplevoid2yrCommented
Just because mc father was part of the special forces does not mean he would get an inheritance as far as we know mc doesnt come from a wealthy family so at most he would get a little money to help with the funeral and maybe a few bills afterward
Both my son and I were left alone to fend for ourselves. So, Hokage-sama took pity on us and gave me enough funds to open a shinobi ware shop to feed ourselves." - simplevoid2yrCommented
Youll probably have to change the name of the company i dont see Tony letting someone else own his company and use his name for it
I'd even be able to grab a couple more stocks out of this luckily. - simplevoid3yrReplied to flavko_supreme
I can tell you know about america because if you did you would know this isnt true.
Three days have passed since the last time he was beaten by his parents. - simplevoid3yrCommented
The main reason some dont like the name is its does not fit the family. It is true many characters in rwby have names from all over but their names still fit their family. Example (Summer, and Ruby), (Weiss,Winter,Whitley) there is a theme when it comes to siblings and parents. So I can understand why some dilike the name.
"Rajeev Rose…" he moved to stare into Ray's eyes now. - simplevoid3yrPosted
It had potential it just could of been excuted better. MC is just doing everything Luffy would’ve so sadly there is nothing really different between the original and this fanfic so far other than the mc. MC and author feel like there just rushing through the arc and story. MC and harem connection and interaction feels empty and could be developed better.
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Absolute duo doesnt not deserve to be in the same power bracket as one piece. It makes no sense who in absolute duo can match any of the top characters in one piece.
This paragraph has been deleted. - simplevoid3yrReplied to Immortuos
A lot for example you dont have to make the ball touch the ground to score in American football, just crooss the goalline. The players also specialize in offense, defense . Also play calling you get 4 plays to move the ball 10 yards or it become the teams ball. But the most noticeable is the passing in American football you can pass forward. These are just the most basic deffernces
Of course, I wasn't lazy my entire life, during my high school days, I was playing football a lot and pretty much any sport in PE lessons. I didn't care which sport we were playing because even though I have played that said sport for the first time, after a few minutes I was already on a level comparable to the students who were focusing numerous years on that sport. I was a fast learner.