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ryno1ni

ryno1ni

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2018-10-16 JoinedUnited States
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Commented

    Gotta say. I'm really not a fan of that line. It just doesn't feel like something an actual person would say.

     "Are you hungry?" 
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Commented

    Why a system. Honestly all systems do is make a decent story boring 9/10 times

    [Caterpillar system activated.]
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    My Journey to Godhood as a Caterpillar
    Eastern · KaiokenGuy
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Commented

    Thats not a thing that works or is useful in any way

    "Fortunately, the wound where the piece of poisonous fang was is wide. Hence, I don't need to cut open her skin; otherwise there would be a lasting scar at that spot." As Su Yu analyzed her wound quickly, he nodded to himself quietly. Then he squatted down and cleaned off the blood on the wound. He then opened his mouth and started to suck out the blood which had been contaminated by the poison.
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    The Divine Nine-Dragon Cauldron
    Eastern · Heavenly Overlord
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Posted

    It's a decent story by all accounts but it's blatantly ripped off from tales of demons and gods. It's not bad to be heavily inspired but this has very little originality so it just ends up being tales of demons and gods 2 but slightly worse in almost every way.

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    Way of the Knights
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Replied to Rex_Raz

    I mean, chapters gotta be named something

    Ultra Skip Of 5 Years
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    My Knowledge Of Cultivation Is Completely Shattered
    Fantasy · TokyoAnime_Seven
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Commented

    Who is this Na Xinyi? i looked back through the beginning chapters and it mentions that he got the 3point-yin body in ch 4 but the only girl it mentions him being with prior is the one he killed

    Ch 103 Chapter 102: Long Chen
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Commented

    I approve

    Wei Wuyin shook his head, "No. It's super easy, barely an inconvenience."
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    Paragon of Sin
    Eastern · KevinAscending
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Commented

    The further i read the more this feels like straight up plagerism

    'This is the reason why you constantly pushed me away even though it's obvious that you want me too.'
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    Way of the Knights
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Replied to Alaxel

    They’re called hundred handed ones in Percy Jackson but thats just the english translation of the name

    Stories said that it was failed product of a nasty experiment. The inspiration of it's creation was from another mythical creature known as the Hecatoncheres, a primordial that is said to have a 50 heads and 50 pairs of arms.
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    Way of the Knights
    Fantasy · Hateful_Fellow
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  • ryno1ni
    ryno1ni3yr
    Posted

    Honestly this is just another system novel. mc gets a computer game like system that doesn’t fit in the setting of the story and it generally reads more like mediocre fan fiction than anything else. Im not against systems but they should be something more unique and fitting with the environment

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    My Disciples Are All Villains
    Eastern · MSRZP
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