boring.too overpowered for nothing . better game novel can be found

i would prefer a fake kitchen with a server that all food coming out from cabinet

i dont mind reading both pov. 1pov is good for the development of mc and his relationship. it just depend on what u want to write.

if u want to use both pov. its better to put somthing to seperate them . i lost it at the middle of the chapter. [img=recommend]

bruh too much description of the marsh base. these chapter should not appear after the girl...i was waiting for a parlement when the girl faint.

i think he can add new things as long he has a clear image of what he wan to add

it was rewrite? because i remember the chapter were longer

the resume is good but the systeme make no sense . he should grow up like an genius child not just transform into an adult to do random things

isnt his grimoire link to his soul? if he split it can hhe ind his father book?

has the author stopped writing this novel?

i enjoy the story so far . even if translation messed up. keep going.

max need to trained more. the stat given by the system feel useless.

without bartan the compétition is still good. just kill him

too long waiting:(

happy new year

iii

no news from authors?

the author stopped? the stori is good

me too this chapter is confusing

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon