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ZiYunshui

ZiYunshui

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2018-12-26 JoinedGlobal
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Yeah, this is how beast taming should be.

    Ch 12 Beautiful Plan
    Beastmastering: The Best Master Ever!
    Eastern · Milk Bottle Huge
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Are you sure this is not a Misfortune System?

    Ch 13 Doomed by Cow Manure
    I Can Track Everything
    Eastern · Sanmao Wu
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Too overacting, disgusting

    Ch 33 Acting Up Again
    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    So stupid

    Ch 10 Black Screen?
    I Am Loaded with Passive Skills
    Eastern · Eat Apples Late at Night
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Idiot mc

    Ch 7 A Nest of Devils
    10,000 Years In A Cultivation Sect: I Obtained A Powerful Technique From The Start
    Eastern · Li Baijin
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Very asian

    Ch 17 Lin Naixue's Difficulties
    I Have Robbed 999 Types Of Powers
    Games · Woody
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Replied to oOoAim

    You clearly have never been trapped in his or her position before kekw. Welp, you're the one who can't find the diamond here so whatever, i hope you can find your own fantasy

    Ero Meter
    Fantasy · roll_the_music
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Posted

    Damn im impressed, you're so good with this stuff. Are you perhaps an expert for this? I can't see any mistakes and you perfectly handle every girl like a pro. I really can't wait for more chapters! Thanks for writing!

    Ero Meter
    Fantasy · roll_the_music
    detail
  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Dang, are you perhaps some expert for this?

    Ch 17 Rollercoaster
    Ero Meter
    Fantasy · roll_the_music
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    Man, you're so good at this

    Ch 15 Stupid!!!
    Ero Meter
    Fantasy · roll_the_music
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    I can stand some repetating plot but man, copy paste a scene? Really?

    Ch 59 Gu Xiang. [2] [R18]
    I Quit Being The Villain
    Urban · Kurupts
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Posted

    I came for R18 but the plot make me stay and follow it till the very end. Not gonna lie, the idea itself is very unique for a web novel, for me at last, i can't find any other work that focused on 'android' and developing them into heroines. Yes you can find that in rpg game but a novel with such a good lemon, interesting plot and wonderfull character development? I doubt you can find any. The world building itself is still on progress so i can't say much about that but so far it locoks really good. I hope you can bring this world into it perfection someday. I hope you'll continue your amazing work, thanks for writing!

    Valkyrie Smash
    Sci-fi · Nomanalive
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui8mth
    Commented

    You better not leave Sae behind in the future. Please dont make it a short relationship

    Ch 66 CH 63: END OF HER FIRST LOVE
    God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
    Fantasy · HIKARU_GENJI
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui1yr
    Commented

    Man, thats warm

    Ch 12 A father's rage.
    Restarting From Genesis
    Fantasy · TechnexGames
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui1yr
    Commented

    No no no please no hero

    Ch 13 Partial Judgement
    The Bloodline System
    Fantasy · TimVic
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui1yr
    Commented

    Honestly, we need more violence for that slut. I mean torture her physically not just insult her with word.

    Ch 13 Chapter 13: Little pet
    The Legacy System
    Fantasy · crazy_immortal
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui1yr
    Commented

    What a trash name

    Ch 4 The First Battle of Mutated Beasts, Wooden Treasure Chest
    Desolate Era: Hatching a Phoenix at the Beginning
    Fantasy · Canopy
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui1yr
    Commented

    Thats what i call hyper-realistic. Good job there

    Ch 32 Chapter 32: Infra's Fetters [Part 2]
    Dragon Lord: Erotic MMO
    Fantasy · Duke_Asmodeus
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  • ZiYunshui
    ZiYunshui1yr
    Commented

    Too stupid for a romance tag

    Ch 1 Ren
    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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