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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift011yr
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    I hate how people feel the need to question other people so nonchalantly in these novels completely disregarding any personal privacy of a stranger they just met.

    However, she would have to grill him with more questions later as she could see the battle had already started in the distance. 
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    God's Path: I Can Create A Lot Of Cheats Through Mutation
    Sci-fi · Million Phantom God
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift011yr
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    Lizard-person exposed if it actually grew back.

    In addition, Chen Mo remembered reading a news article on the Internet once that said eunuchs in ancient times had to be checked every year, which was referred to by the process known as "body examination". If there was a sign that it had grown back, it would have to be cut off once again
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    Immortal Cultivation Simulator: Starting From The Empress' Palace
    Eastern · Orange Cat Hugging Fish To Sleep
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Replied to MountBook

    Wasn't Jack the Ripper a serial killer that killed prostitutes?

    He often carried out various assassination missions, and when he killed, he did not hesitate at all. He would kill anyone who knew the organization's secrets without mercy… He would never remember the faces and names that he had already killed!
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    My Sister Exposed My Identity As A Villainous Godfather
    Urban · Taunt Monster
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Posted

    It's a half-baked novel that doesn't make sense at all, not that you would expect too much realism from a web novel but this is just poor writing and isn't engaging at all.

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    Killer: I Start By Killing A Fly With A Poker Card
    Urban · joker
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Replied to Vixdraconen

    it's alright, I don't read it anymore though.

    Skill 1: [Heavenly Power] (Active Skill): God Devourer Ant can execute a powerful attack that results in damage ten-fold the [Strength] attribute. Cooldown time: 3 seconds.
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    Doomsday Online: Supreme Blessing
    Urban · Jixia Academy's Half-Step Gentleman
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Commented

    Would this mean it won't make an operating loss, or does it include the original and subsequent investments? if it's the latter, and he invested his 50 million from the system into the shop somehow, then wouldn't he gain 50 million in personal funds?

    "2: A shop that never incurs losses;"
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    Getting Rich Overnight, Starting From a Multiple-Choice Question
    Urban · As if New Marks
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Posted

    It's an interesting concept and I would like to see a novel like this, but the way it's written is terrible. I hate the loose plot progression and the way the characters interact with the MC. In short, this is something you only read if you're not looking at anything other than the MC getting women to sleep with him and showing off while not leaving his house unless it's to save someone. It's honestly hurting my intelligence even though I'm only 19 chapters in. Just some examples of what makes my brain hurt reading this. The MC starts dating his neighbor, who he rarely talked to on the day he got the system. She literally has no reason for liking him, other than his looks. She even acknowledged that he didn't go out much at all other than to go to work and rarely interacted with others. He also sleeps with the reporter he literally just meets just because he's handsome despite just getting a girlfriend 2 days ago. He also used magic like it's normal in front of people, and even decided to advertise it without thinking of the trouble it's going to cause him. All because he thought more people are going to ask him to leave his house so he can refuse them to get more points for the system's store. It's just really dumb to me how he isn't keeping a low profile at this stage in the novel, and I understand it's to progress the plot but it's so sloppy in my opinion.

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    I Will Never Leave the House!
    Urban · Orange and Large Watermelon
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Posted

    bad for me........................................ ............................... ................................ .............. ...............

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    I Can Create Perfect Accidents.
    Urban · Comfortably Trippy
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Commented

    Don't you mean Switzerland?

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    Singlehandedly
    Eastern · Dissipating Wind
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Commented

    Are you sure about that?

    As for shooting, of course, he could not. He wasn't crazy.
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    Since The Red Moon Appeared
    Sci-fi · Ghost of Dark Mountain
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift012yr
    Replied to Dotencsure

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    Since The Red Moon Appeared
    Sci-fi · Ghost of Dark Mountain
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Posted

    A transmigrated scientist who became the 2nd prince of a kingdom that wants to understand the truths behind the magic that's found in the new world he's living in. All that's fine but there's a lot of scientific jargon and he spends most of his time performing experiments so far in the story so there's not much to review really. However it seems like there's going to be a trend in which all of his experiments and discoveries are going to turn into heavy info dumps that include a lot of chemical and element names and their functions when placed together or how they effect the human body. Of course it could end up differently I guess.

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    Technological Wizard
    Fantasy · 23rd Sun
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Posted

    Don't make a novel about a vampire if he's not going to act like a vampire. Within the first 19 chapters he already obtained the ability to withstand sunlight and gains the same disposition [skin type] as humans. Another thing is that it all seems too easy for him. He literally starts off finding high-tier chests easily inside the Count's mansion, and later on they all become super convenient ways of strengthening himself or giving him exactly what he needs in his situation. Overall, if you wanna see a vampire act like a human and get protected by "legitimate" plot armor in the form of treasure chests then you'll like this.

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    The Treasure-Chest Hunting Vampire
    Eastern · I Have A Big Treasure Chest
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Commented

    sta·bling /ˈstāb(ə)liNG/ noun accommodations for horses.

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    The Era of Gods
    Sci-fi · Become a Taoist Overnight
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Commented

    Yes, leave the one holding their foot to protect you.

    "You, the one holding your foot. Right, you… You will follow me, and protect me by my side.
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    I Have 100M Summoning Scrolls
    Games · Rejuvenation in Seven Nights
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
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    "Hot damn, this is amazing! I'm unstoppable!" Delight bloomed in his heart, and he tried out some of the other goods. They all worked.
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    I Have 100M Summoning Scrolls
    Games · Rejuvenation in Seven Nights
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Commented
    "Do you think that's all I got? There's still more!"
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    Unparalleled After Ten Consecutive Draws
    Eastern · Carefree Smile
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Commented

    I would've forgotten that if you didn't mention it... again.

    The incomplete supernatural book Ring Explosion was flawed and caused the cultivator to experience intense pain in the soul at all times. If one cultivated it under normal circumstances, they would likely experience ill changes in the soul, and it might even collapse on its own.
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    Tanky Mage System
    Fantasy · Black Sky
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
    Commented

    "...wouldn't this floor..." to, "...wouldn't leave this floor..."

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    Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince
    Eastern · ZinonWonder
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  • Makeshift01
    Makeshift013yr
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    "...invite be..." to, "...invite me..."

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    Rebirth Of The Villainous Crown Prince
    Eastern · ZinonWonder
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