Hey author I have a suggestion, If protag. increases his level and uses the term "level up" it's understandable. But if other characters uses that term instead of "increasing your cultivation" it creates a slight discrepancy or something similar to that feeling.

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I've read many types of novels ranging from chinese cultivation (martial world) to korean urban novels ( solo levelling, returnee, etc). I feel as a reader we can be tolerant to bad translation (to some extent), thick plot Armor, the jittery causing romance etc. but what we or I can't is if the story stops making sense. The story is important and how it's presented is also important. What attracted to me this novel was its uniqueness of story and the way it is represented to the reader.