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Nelspie

Nelspie

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2018-10-02 JoinedGlobal
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 25 Chapter 25 Anti-Climatic Battle and the Plan
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 24 Chapter 24 Holding a Hostage and Scott Goodwin
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thabks for the update!

    Ch 22 Chapter 22  The Return and a Situation
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thansk for the chapte…. not sure how everyone else feels, but im okay with sub-par chapters if it means the overall story arc continues. You cannot have great chapters without Having lame chapters. With that said, i still liked the chapter! Sets you up for another!

    Ch 21 Chapter 21 Kyle's Resolve and The Applin Challenge
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thanks for the chapters! Good take with the LeGendaries!

    Ch 20 Chapter 20 A Loss and Faust's Vengeance
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Awesome chapter super stoked to see what a goos author can do creatively with Battling! Commented on a paragraph is the chapter with a typo.

    Ch 18 Chapter 18 The Mind over the Heart and A Surprise
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Not sure how the ending sentance is supposed to go exactly seems liKe its missing a word Or two

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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Can’t wait!!

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 Out of Ideas and Articuno's Request
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! If you ever need to run ideas by somebody let me know. Lastly Towards the end Of the second paragraph there is a typo “ride” should be “rift”

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 Out of Ideas and Articuno's Request
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    ThankS for the chapter!

    Ch 16 Chapter 16 Educating Kyle and A Looming War
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! The anticipation everyday waiting for more chapters is intense!

    Ch 15 Chapter 15 The Snowy Rift and a Shocking Encounter
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter!

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 Grand Grove and a Psychic Development
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! Big fan Of the Applin line! In Regards to the Final graduation test that faust will go through, What Do you think about Doing a multi chapter release?

    Ch 13 Chapter 13 Return and the Apple Opportunity 
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Thanks for the chapter! I really Like that Faust is actually able to think intellectually whilst In battles and doesn’t needlessly power through for the win at the sacrifice of his mons. And from the looks of it his Eevee is packing quite the punch! In Regards to the trade evolutions, would you like to keep the Idea of trading being the mechanic in which The mons evolve or are you open to a new mechnic to fill that evolution roll? Couple of barebones ideas: 1.) maybe make It where mons that need trade to evolve are “released” and if the bond between trainer and mon is strong enough the mon chooses to return/ stay with the trainer triggering its trade evolution... 2.) You could make faust trade a trade Evolution mon with his friend Kyle, make faust act like its a new discovery when the Mon evolves, and allow him to Use the discovery to further launch him into the research world/ fund his growth.

    Ch 12 Chapter 12 Plotted Against and The First Battle
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
    Commented

    Thanks For the chapter! Caught a typo/mistake where tou refer to professor ross as Professor faust in the first paragraph i believe.

    Ch 11 Chapter 11 Training and the Third Pokemon
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
    Commented

    Awesome chapter! Keep them coming!

    Ch 10 Chapter 10 Progress and the Second Pokemon
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Super excited that you are writing this story! I’ve been waiting for something like this forever! Do you have a Planned release schedule?

    Ch 9 Chapter 9 Faust's Fear and the Eeveelutions
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  • Nelspie
    Nelspie2yr
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    Good concept! Very Excited to see where this story goes. I have been searching for something like this for a long time. keep up the great work!

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