rap_monster
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rap like a monster
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rap_monster1yrReplied to luciferswifeyI mostly forgot the story now, but this world (maybe) has abundant magic so why not just make convenient magic clothes? XD
Watching him come down from his horse, Gideon told her to turn her head away from the king so she did.- rap_monster1yrCommented
Your Fae addiction is mingling with your mind 😂
"What does she want?" he asked, swallowing another grape. - rap_monster1yrCommented
Childish 👤
"You know my answer, Father," he said. "Why go through all this all over again? I will not marry. And that is final!" - rap_monster1yrCommented
Rest assured, Alpha. No one has a single clue~
Unhappy, Eltanin paced his bedroom. How could she simply leave without him knowing? How did she escape the room so softly that no one had seen her? He wanted to give Fafnir a good dose of his anger, but that would mean that the King of Draka was crazy for a girl. Which, he supposed, he was, but didn't want to reveal, or admit. - rap_monster1yrCommented
Lowkey hillarious 😂
After a moment of silence, Fafnir coughed lightly and asked, "Find who?" Only Fafnir could dare ask this of King Eltanin without the fear of decapitation and his head being hung upon a wall. - rap_monster1yrCommented
Truly capable 🖤
Fafnir frowned, checking the looks on his soldiers. All of them returned a blank, unknowing stare. "No," he replied, shivering inside. - rap_monster1yrCommented
Why? It is understandable that in these people would be prejudiced but isn't restricting them to some limited professions a less productive idea? Maybe the King is just incapable.
Most of her kind shifted for the first time when they turned eighteen, but some had shifted earlier, too. In the monastery, the priests could figure out who would shift early and who would not. They assigned the jobs to the people accordingly. Those who never shifted, or who had lost their wolves, were enslaved. They worked in the kitchens, did the laundry, cleaned the latrines, and scrubbed the floors. - rap_monster1yrCommented
I am sure this is a good enough story but please, PLEASE, use paragraph breaks. They are simple to understand and not using them at right time makes reading feel like a chore.
The few sconces that lit the corridor had dimmed, producing only a dull light that lined the hall. She waited for a sound, anything, to caution her, but heard nothing — only the rhythmic drumbeat of her panicked breath. She glanced left and right, and when she saw that was alone, she scurried down the walkway. At its end, she found a deep stairwell leading down. A sense of foreboding hit her, and goosebumps rippled across her flesh. She felt like returning to the bedroom but didn't. How could she take such a chance with someone she did not know? What if the guards caught her? What if the King caught her? She was a spy, after all, from the monastery — a place that was considered sacred amongst all the kingdoms. The place where the werewolf kings came to offer their prayers and sacrifices. If the King came to know that Menkar had sent her, the monastery's name would be in shambles. However, a thought rattled her. What if Menkar denied who she was? - rap_monster1yrCommented
pried herself free* but even then the word is not right.
"Calman's horns!" she breathed. Tania shook her head to get out of her stupor. She had to unravel herself as soon as possible, without inviting too much unnecessary attention. With every kernel of energy within her, she lifted his arm. Pinned beneath such a heavy man, she wriggled as much as she could, but wriggling out seemed like a massive effort. A caged little bird underneath a big bad wolf. After a few attempts, she prized herself free, letting his body fall to the bedsheets. The man groaned as he stirred; Tania froze as fear ensnared her. If he woke up now, he would hand her to the King and she would end up dead. So much for the freedom she had sought. - rap_monster1yrCommented
Dont take notes 💀 It's only good if both people dont care 💀
The truth was that Eltanin's predatory nature had attracted many women. He had never been emotionally invested in them and hadn't cared as to how they felt around him. He would get what he wanted, and that's where the relationship ended. - rap_monster1yrCommentedCh 21 Chapter 21
- rap_monster1yrReplied to ImpassionateGods
What disappointment ????? Did you not read 'Evil Brother' in the story title???? I am irritated to see so many complaining. Why bother coming here if you wickedness is not your cup of tea? or do you prefer those so called 'evil' men who are unrealistically infatuated with the FL?
"Aw, don't get so worked up, Sister-in-law," he took out a business card from his suit pocket. He grabbed her wrist and put the card in her hand, "This card has my private number. Remember to call me when you change your mind." - rap_monster1yrReplied to Pashinator
Have you read the name of this novel? It has 'Evil Brother' in it (ʘᴗʘ✿)
"Aw, don't get so worked up, Sister-in-law," he took out a business card from his suit pocket. He grabbed her wrist and put the card in her hand, "This card has my private number. Remember to call me when you change your mind." - rap_monster1yrCommented
Someone keeping track (ʘᴗʘ✿)
"We're in-laws, yes. Not for long," Vernon interrupted. "You're probably going to divorce my brother soon. But, even if you're not, I don't really care. I'm just a little curious about you, that's all. Since you can actually make Vincent stay for… two years?" - rap_monster1yrCommented
Jada- (ㆁωㆁ)
Chloe could only stay silent because that was true. Jada Jackson was one of Chloe's acquaintances. She met her during a teacher-parent meeting in school about a year ago. - rap_monster1yrCommented
Besides one ಠಿ_ಠಿ
"Anything is better to face than being with you." Chloe turned around and looked over her shoulder, "And it's Chloe Carlson for you. I don't need your surname or your money. You Grays can rot for all I care." - rap_monster1yrCommented
He...he is saying all that around his daughter?
"I'm not stupid, Chloe. If we get a divorce, I bet you'll definitely stop me from seeing Mackie, unless I send you money. Do you think you can use our daughter to scam me, you dumb bitch? I figured out your plans!" - rap_monster1yrCommented
ಠ ͜ʖ ಠ
They were just the two souls entangled in a cold relationship. It had been like that for the past 7 years, after all. - rap_monster1yrCommented
All your money, go homeless ಠ◡ಠ
"So, what else do you need?" Vincent asked. His light tone infuriated Chloe. This man seriously had no conscience. Even after she mustered up her courage to sign that divorce paper and revealed her pent-up anger, Vincent acted as if nothing bad happened. - rap_monster1yrCommented
"our" because Vincent is such a good father (*˘︶˘*).｡*♡
"You mean our daughter, Mackie?" Vincent looked to his left and grinned smugly, "She is still choosing whatever toys she wants for her birthday. We're in a toy store."