for me the story is good. just need a bit modification to make the plots stronger. i was expecting some twist and turns but probably it will improve the you write other stories. good luck to you.
The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money
i was dumbfounded with the author's creative thinking. i thought the book is just a short one but reading through it seems like I've read a book witwith a thousand pages on it. nice one.