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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu8h
    Commented

    another repeat. fix it.

    Ch 456 Chapter 455: Shock, the Living Legend!
    Global Beast Taming: Awakening Top 10 SSS Talents at the Beginning
    Eastern · The golden robe is like a dragon
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu1d
    Commented

    another repeat. fix it.

    Ch 452 Chapter 451: You Don't Even Have to Lift a Finger to Kill Someone!
    Global Beast Taming: Awakening Top 10 SSS Talents at the Beginning
    Eastern · The golden robe is like a dragon
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2d
    Commented

    gee, seems a lot happened in the previous chapter that was lost due to the chunk of repeated words... fix it.

    Ch 451 Chapter 450: Just Forgot?
    Global Beast Taming: Awakening Top 10 SSS Talents at the Beginning
    Eastern · The golden robe is like a dragon
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2d
    Commented

    same chunk of story four times. fix it.

    Ch 450 Chapter 449: What other moves do you have? Bring them on!
    Global Beast Taming: Awakening Top 10 SSS Talents at the Beginning
    Eastern · The golden robe is like a dragon
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu1mth
    Commented

    huh? it wasn't switched babies with Su family. they found her in the river. what story is this bird spinning?

    Little Kingfisher didn't give up, "If the impostor is grateful it's fine, but what if they encounter an ungrateful and unfilial wretch? Not only did they raise her for nothing, but they can't even recognize their own daughter, wouldn't that be a tragedy in life?"
    Everyone Wants to Pamper the Lucky Daughter
    General · Ting Lan Listening to the Rain
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu1mth
    Commented

    to it

    As for the poison that was fully premating the area, they were completely and utterly invulnerable to is. With their Qi barriers constantly erected, the poison couldn't even penetrate through them.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu1mth
    Commented

    permeating

    As for the poison that was fully premating the area, they were completely and utterly invulnerable to is. With their Qi barriers constantly erected, the poison couldn't even penetrate through them.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    the merchant is selling his wares, not wears

    As much as I wanted to use my own personal poison, it was against the rules, all I could do was make poison from the wear that he was selling. So I rapidly assembled a cannister that had this liquid form of poison and added several inscriptions around it. I then placed a small Saint Qi crystal on top of the cannister which will act as a detonator for it.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    It's awkward to say cascading waterfalls cascade...etc. It may be better to say something like cascading waterfalls grace steep cliffsides, etc. Or instead of grace, adorn or even rush down? Something like that instead of repeating cascading/cascade.

    Each island is a masterpiece of divine craftsmanship, suspended in the air like jewels adorning the crown of creation. Verdant forests blanket the undulating landscapes, their emerald canopies swaying gently in the whispering breeze. Cascading waterfalls cascade down sheer cliffsides, their crystalline waters shimmering in the golden light of the sun.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    taken, not took

    "There is a teleportation gate in the center of the sect, it is primed and ready, many cultivators had already took it and left for the tournament we're one of the very few left," he said.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    swaths of land, or swathes, both spellings work.

    I let that sink into their heads, after all, these tribesmen were born in peril and danger and had to adapt, if you were to throw them in the overworld they'd dominate great swats of land with ease.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    shouldn't that be general of the west?

    Dwei then shouted, "Dragon Squad!" and suddenly a group of ten people arrived in our presence, they were fully decked out in the general of the east's premium armor. The quality of their Qi and their overall cultivation level was incredible, to say the least.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    I think it's supposed to be prowess

    The pain was enough for a person to faint, but I bit through the pain and trusted my regenerative prows.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented
    The small spider raised one of its legs in salute and grabbed the pills and jumped into the sewers.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    that is adorable

    The small spider raised one of its legs in salute and grabbed the pills and jumped into the sewers.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
    detail
  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Replied to LordofRavens

    no, I think it's supposed to be prowess.... hasn't gotten it right yet in a single chapter......

    "You've come to prove your worth and power, but with your ability to neutralize poison, you've been given an unfair advantage. Thus, I must seal your prows until this trial ends."
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    prowess.........

    After we headed back, we found that the disciples already set up camp. Some were practicing and some were meditating, tomorrow's event was going to be a great opportunity to prove one's prows and gain 'Face' for their sect. So everyone was excited and anxious at the same time.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    Prowess......................

    "Your Qi, it's demonic, I felt it the moment we met. But you, for some reason have very little control over your Demonic Prows. Though you can use it, you are not tuned to it. This manual will allow you further understanding of Demonic Qi and its application. But I doubt you can fully understand or use it," she said.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Commented

    .....prowess......

    "Yet, what made them fearsome was not their battle prows, but their ability to blend in with the shadows, and their ability to work and function as deadly guards to that family's treasure room. Dark Beasts when raised right can recognize one owner for life, and will give their lives for the owner. Once given a command they will take it to the limit of their ability or the extent of their lives. They are forever loyal, and extremely smart. Their bodies can grow almost infinitely strong by consumption of powerful heavenly treasures. Yet their glaring weakness remains as creatures that cannot sustain sunlight. If only they were not weak to this element, they would have been a force to be reckoned with in battles.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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  • FSH_Fu
    FSH_Fu2mth
    Replied to LordofRavens

    pretty sure it was supposed to be prowess... they haven't gotten it right yet, and they really seem to like this word......

    I read about the creature and all of its habits, food diet and even its prows. It wasn't that strong but it was dangerous for a beginning cultivator. I'm still surprised I managed to survive that encounter, but it was all thanks to Poison God's Heritage.
    Poison God's Heritage
    Eastern · Biako
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