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  • D_O_3404
    D_O_34041yr
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    Author, frankly, I don't like Sunny's relationship with Cassie and Neph after the second book, it would be great if you could embody this sentence in a scene where Sunny's feelings and pain are illustrated. (I don't hate you, hate itself is a feeling and I don't feel anything about you..) Instead of the friendship path, the mutual benefit path is better after what happened. And Sunny has his dignity, he did not make a mistake, if the dignity was lost, there is no need to live (when it comes to my dignity, I will trample on you even if you are a mine) Nevertheless, a wonderful novel, continue with more improvement of characters, especially Sunny. His character did not advance with his adventures and age much

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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    D_O_34041yr
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    The idea of the novel is okay, but there are two major problems spoiling it. First, the novel is so fast that it makes nonsense. The cultivation is supposed to be slow and the journey fun, but to cross entire worlds in a few days and then the author gives me petty reasons, it insults my intelligence? Second: Cheating in this novel is a good idea for whom the author has exaggerated in his use and diversity. For example: Need cultivation? the system Need luck? the system Need resources? the system Need time? the system Need talent? the system Need strength? the system Need techniques? the system Oh brother, the novel has become nonsense

    altalt
    Becoming An Ancestor In Another World From This Day On
    Fantasy · Magic Principal
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  • D_O_3404
    D_O_34041yr
    Replied to SchadenfreudeZP

    You are right, I also did not like the development of events, of all you can see, she saw the moment he said his real name and then how the hell did she know that saying his real name makes him a slave? And worse than that, Sunny, who was betrayed and enslaved, almost forgiven that traitor and still misses those who enslaved him against his will, knowing that he cannot disobey her orders at the moment they meet, is this normal? Is it a dog?

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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    D_O_34041yr
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    It's a great book But I didn't like the beginning of volume 3 MC has been betrayed by his best friend; He lost his freedom forever (body and soul) and in the end he forgave them; He looked like a dog, ; And I thought it was a story about adventure, freedom and survival; The MC who lived the life of the slum, to know who betrayed you once can betray you again,; And there is no excuse for betrayal, in the end forgive them easily (Adventure and the world were great) I hope the writer will correct the defect and make MC more independent and differentiate between friendship and naivety that does not suit him and be more determined and logical

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • D_O_3404
    D_O_34041yr
    Replied to Guiltythree

    لا باس و شكرا للرد

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • D_O_3404
    D_O_34041yr
    Replied to Guiltythree

    There is a big mistake in the story for the author to correct. MC is low on confidence but is betrayed by his best friend. MC longs for freedom, so his other friend robbed him of his freedom. He is supposed to collapse, rewrite his principles, not forgive. Not to miss his master like a dog. Author, I made a mistake that gave me a headache, especially since it was a great novel. I hope you will take this into consideration and speed up his mental and physical development. It is better for him to use his ability to gather information to mingle with the underworld, build his strength, and strive for freedom and independence.

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • D_O_3404
    D_O_34041yr
    Replied to malvin_b

    I said what I'm thinking The novel was dropped because of this Nef is not a friend, but the greatest and most dangerous enemy, for friendship is between equals. Imagine this? You are literally slave to your friend; Deprived of your freedom you cannot lie or disobey, by order you become a thug , by order to commit suicide, By order you kneel and beg, Is this friendship? friendship is impossible , Even their beliefs and ideas are different. He is the slave of Neph and the weapon of her revenge , Don't expect to leave someone with the power of an MC; He is her servant. There are two options: delete the tag or kill every soul you know its secret, no mercy unless you want to be a dog. You say romantic? Between the slave and the master!!!!! This is nonsense !!!! Even slaves have a will. MC is literally a slave of body and soul. There is no romance here. There is no love for a slave without a will. It's a game, damn it.

    altalt
    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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