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Rakyer

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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer27d
    Replied to Justin_Richardsn

    You must probably be a person with a submissive and obedient nature who acquires "courage" only in front of a computer or cell phone and identified with the MC, it is understandable why you would be upset.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5 - The dwarfs' forge!
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    Reborn as Thor!
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer8mth
    Commented

    If the MC had regained his memories of another life the day the planet was destroyed, it wouldn't have been a problem, but did you have to do that right after he was born? He had all the time in the world to harness his race's capabilities and overcome this problem. It's hard to say if the MC is stupid or lazy but that prologue you made portrayed him in the worst possible light.

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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer9mth
    Replied to UTGaster

    The premise of the story is different since he is a son of Kronos and the copying only started after this meeting with Diana, but it is a good read. The name is "Young Titan" from fiction.live I'm replying again since this author is hiding my comments.

    Ch 32 Chapter - 30
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    Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer9mth
    Replied to PriamustheBright

    The premise of the story is different since it's about a son of Kronos and the copying only started after this meeting with Diana, but it's a good read. Name is "Young Titan" from fiction.live

    Ch 32 Chapter - 30
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    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer9mth
    Replied to SirLonely

    Yes he is doing a good job of copying another author's work and posting it as his own.

    Ch 32 Chapter - 30
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    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer10mth
    Commented

    I'm honestly disappointed you just so blatantly copied this interaction with Wonder Woman from the Young Titan fanfic and left no credit

    Ch 30 Chapter - 28
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    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer11mth
    Commented

    It was nice to read, too bad.

    Ch 14 Chapter no.14 Sasuke vs Naruto
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    Naruto : The System Files
    Anime & Comics · Adamo_Amet
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer11mth
    Commented

    Won't Wonder Woman be in the harem?

    Ch 16 Questions & Answers
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    Rewrite! DC: True Power of Ancient Saiyan
    Anime & Comics · Demon_King22
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Replied to Aerle

    Why didn't you make it clear in the synopsis that this fanfic is a blatant copy with an "SI" on Sasuke's body from the fanfic "The Sociopathy Of Uchiha Sasuke"?

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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    So you're blatantly copying Lucifer Morningstar fanfic with only an "SI" in place?

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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    I honestly can't empathize with this MC, probably because in the previous chapter you failed to portray his feelings and made a rushed prologue that felt more like a commentator saying about what happened rather than a real character and in this chapter it makes me question the intelligence of the his MC, supposedly "suffering" his whole life was to be expected from someone who is more cautious and doesn't make decisions that affect his whole life based on a hasty decision (although the silly way he died in the last chapter makes me consider that it's not surprise this decision )

    Ch 2 Meeting With The Demi-Gods. (Choosing A Path)
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    Reincarnated With The Undefeated System
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    "Perverted or ruthless characters are easy to write." You're not wrong, in fact it's easy to write about them, what's not easy is to do well, let's take the stories of Jord or Dark Wolf Shiro for example, they manage to write both categories of characters sensationally, but back to their story, I find the concept of "without emotion" interesting, but it is very delicate because usually the authors only make the MC like that when it's convenient, in one chapter he really is like that and in the other he seems to be another character, I'm at the beginning of your fanfic but i will give it a chance. Note: I'm using GT, so I apologize if this comment isn't readable.

    Ch -1 My review[Spoliers]
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    DIDN'T ASK FOR THIS.
    Anime & Comics · OVERLOAD69
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    I had stopped reading this story when the MC had sought out the dwarves to become a blacksmith and today I decided to continue reading and honestly I am shocked, you developed the story in an incredible way, I was too hasty in my last comment and I almost lost this gem that is a rarity on this site.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14 - The strongest always prevails!
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    Reborn as Thor!
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    Did he leave his genetic data in a lab where anyone can walk in and access it? Isn't the MC supposed to be an intelligent person??

    Ch 4 Dr. Lizard
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    Marvel : The Bloodline Emphasis
    Anime & Comics · Void_06
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    This story is perfect, don't mind the negative comments.

    Ch 16 16. Date Part-2
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    Slow Life in Pornhwa
    Anime & Comics · NoOne_imp
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    I found this story today and started reading it without much expectation but when I saw it I had read all the chapters and I was really impressed, it's a great job and I hope you don't stop writing, it really is amazing

    Ch 21 Secret Mission
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    I always end up as a side character?!
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Replied to Kw0z
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    Rewriting #1
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Commented

    Didn't he get any points even with all that amount of exercise? Or did he have physical stats less than 10?

    Ch 2 Chapter 1.1
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    Rewriting #1
    Anime & Comics · NovaHyperSage
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Replied to EasymodeX

    Personality variation is interesting but all with common sense, there are fanfics that portray her as some young master of the Xianxia genre, it's every absurd thing I've read that it's refreshing to find something closer to "reality"

    Ch 6 Munchkinery
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    DXD SI: It's Me, DIO!
    Anime & Comics · JManM
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  • Rakyer
    Rakyer1yr
    Replied to Rakyer

    Exp

    Ch 121 Day 121
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    Exp-Sect
    Anime & Comics · DevourerOfSouls
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