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If the MC had regained his memories of another life the day the planet was destroyed, it wouldn't have been a problem, but did you have to do that right after he was born? He had all the time in the world to harness his race's capabilities and overcome this problem. It's hard to say if the MC is stupid or lazy but that prologue you made portrayed him in the worst possible light.
Why didn't you make it clear in the synopsis that this fanfic is a blatant copy with an "SI" on Sasuke's body from the fanfic "The Sociopathy Of Uchiha Sasuke"?
So you're blatantly copying Lucifer Morningstar fanfic with only an "SI" in place?
I honestly can't empathize with this MC, probably because in the previous chapter you failed to portray his feelings and made a rushed prologue that felt more like a commentator saying about what happened rather than a real character and in this chapter it makes me question the intelligence of the his MC, supposedly "suffering" his whole life was to be expected from someone who is more cautious and doesn't make decisions that affect his whole life based on a hasty decision (although the silly way he died in the last chapter makes me consider that it's not surprise this decision )
"Perverted or ruthless characters are easy to write." You're not wrong, in fact it's easy to write about them, what's not easy is to do well, let's take the stories of Jord or Dark Wolf Shiro for example, they manage to write both categories of characters sensationally, but back to their story, I find the concept of "without emotion" interesting, but it is very delicate because usually the authors only make the MC like that when it's convenient, in one chapter he really is like that and in the other he seems to be another character, I'm at the beginning of your fanfic but i will give it a chance. Note: I'm using GT, so I apologize if this comment isn't readable.
I had stopped reading this story when the MC had sought out the dwarves to become a blacksmith and today I decided to continue reading and honestly I am shocked, you developed the story in an incredible way, I was too hasty in my last comment and I almost lost this gem that is a rarity on this site.