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Emilly_y

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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y6d
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    One day I was forced to watch Peppa Pig for 5 hours straight, I'm in chapter 318 and that's how I feel currently reading this novel, that I'm being forced to watch Peppa Pig again. The plot is very childish, it seems written for children aged 7 or younger, there is a chapter where I keep counting on my finger the logical errors that are happening. It has very good funny parts but the 4.7 rating is overinflated, for me the maximum rating should be 4 and I think the current one only exists because they are deleting reviews with few stars because no matter what I think, someone who has already read some novels is unlikely to give a such a high rating without considering so many problems in the novel, I will do my part and give 1 star to try to reduce this horrible average of 4.7 so that there are no more people fooled like me.

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    Forced to Date a Big Shot
    Urban · Mr. Yan
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y14d
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    If anyone is interested in my review and the reason for this review, I wrote it in Muthoni_Murira's comment. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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    Young Master Fu’s Incredible Real Heiress
    Urban · Sweet Sago
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y14d
    Replied to Muthoni_Murira

    I completely agree with this review, I still continued reading because I'm used to cliches but the author punched me in the stomach with a horrible plot in the final 50 chapters with the chapter called "biological daughter", I thought it was horrible but there are only 50 chapters left to finish so I can finish this novel, my friends, how could I be so wrong and surprise myself that the author could make it even worse hahahaha laughing in disgust hahahaha I dropped it in chapter 980, regret, disgust, sadness, joy for stopping reading this, a lot of emotions for a lot of wasted time, in this review it was given a rating of 2/5 but I think that's too much, if I could give a negative rating I would, it goes on my list as the worst novel I've read in my life and look what already I've read more than 100 novels in all these years and today I discovered what it's like to literally vomit while reading a book. Finally, I have to give credit to the author who managed to surpass the other authors for managing to create a novel that already had dozens of holes caused by the usual "alzhaimer" of these types of novels because in the last chapters of dozens of holes in the plot he managed to multiply this by 10 or 20 times with a single plot, congratulations author, many congratulations, probably even the gpt chat knows how to maintain a better plot. I will never read anything by this author again so as not to affect my brain.

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    Young Master Fu’s Incredible Real Heiress
    Urban · Sweet Sago
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y2mth
    Replied to Emilly_y

    It was supposed to be a good wine but was forced to age. I think the author received good feedback about the gay interactions that were being fun at the beginning and decided to increase it by 10x thinking that it would improve even more and keep more readers to pay.

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    Master Pei's Wife is a Devil Concubine
    General · Mr. Gao Ren
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y2mth
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    I dropped it because the author forces things too much, for example the gay interactions were very good but there comes a moment when you realize that the author starts to force this all the time which irritates, just the initial plot of being reincarnated in modern times is cool after This turns into a total family drama, I thought it would show more about FL by doing business and learning about modern times but that doesn't happen and when it does it's just a moment to explain the reasons for FL. I read almost 400 chapters and I dropped it when Pei Huai's parents got divorced because, as I said, the author likes to force everything, for me it's okay that Ml's father doesn't love his mother but him falling in love with that actress is diminishing a character who does not have a negative IQ, the actions of ml's father do not match how he was described and it is very disgusting to see such a blatant contradiction in a character, so it is blatant that the author only forced this to continue and further strengthen gay interactions that he implemented/strong women. Ps: Describing it, it seems like I'm homophobic but that was so forced that I lost all my interest that the author gained in the first 250 chapters, when I was still in the 250 chapters I thought the novel deserved 5/5 but then a 3/5 is the best that I can classify.

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    Master Pei's Wife is a Devil Concubine
    General · Mr. Gao Ren
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y2mth
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    It was fun to read even with a lot of mistakes, I read up to chapter 563 but it got tiring, the last 100 or 200 chapters seemed like the same thing so I couldn't bear to continue. If anyone gives me spoilers that it gets better later I'll come back but for now I can't continue because it was too boring. Another thing, the novel is very light, there's no suspense, drama or anything, it's just a light showbiz read, the fl's enemies are defeated so easily that I don't even know if it's possible to consider them real enemies, and the system is forced, there are a thousand features but it doesn't have much use for FL, for example she increased her IQ by 10 points becoming very intelligent but when she increases it to 100 there are no changes, she just increases it to 100 because the system forces her to increase it. There are a lot of things in the system but where I left off the author only uses it to have plot content, with the system already overwhelming the novel I imagine without then. Another thing is that there are a lot of characters, the author started throwing characters wherever he could, while reading I kept thinking where this character came from without explanation or I kept trying to remember the name of that character because there must be more than 50 characters presented.

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    Young Master Qin Keeps Coveting Me After I Beat Him Up
    General · Like Dawn
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y2mth
    Replied to Sudhir_Shukla_3552

    I read up to chapter 404 but I couldn't stand it and came to read the comments and I'm glad I did, now I can drop it with a clear mind. For people thinking about reading, don't waste your time, two months in the novel's chronological line in 400 chapters with small boring plots and little plot that is really worth it. I'm sure the last 100 chapters of the 700 will be rushed.

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    Real And Fake Young Lady: I Have Seven Brothers Pampering Me After I Transmigrated
    General · Dream Coffee
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y2mth
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    I dropped it in chapter 182 because the girl simply went to apologize to the guy who almost killed her mother and even created a device for his damaged brain because she felt guilty for beating him too much. ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! ABSURD! The only good thing about this novel is the villain Hou You, she is constructed so well that I feel sorry for her even though she has done so many things wrong, I think she was the closest to the reality of a character who goes back years in time after suffering torture that could be , I thought she was very silly for someone who went back in time but then I analyzed it and I believe I have never seen a character as well thought out as she was, unfortunately she only saves the entire novel the rest is just a 2/5 at best .

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    Fake Rich Daughter Is A Scientist From The Future
    General · The Technology Bigshot
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y2mth
    Replied to pysche_talusan

    I agree, ml is described as a superman but he is well below expectations, I thought that fl would be a strong woman because of her fight with her stepmother but after that she lost all the brain she had, in short if you are a masochist read it because you will be in anguish reading it

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    I Woke My Disabled Husband up at Wedding Night!
    General · Curling Green Smoke
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y3mth
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    I found the beginning forced because there was no reason for everyone to really betray him but I continued reading until there was rape in chapter 62. For me, threatening to have sex is rape and if you say otherwise you need to go to a psychologist for treatment. ahhh but she liked it, it was still rape.

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    The Damned Demon
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y4mth
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    the ending is rushed. I have the feeling that the author wanted to write a lot more but in the last chapters he gave up. 3 or 4 chapters before the end, the fl didn't discover that ml was Z and ended without knowing. The plot was of good quality until chapters 250~300 and then it declined to the level of horrible, if you don't have anything interesting to read then I recommend it but otherwise it's very weak for a current 4+ rating at the time I've been reading it.

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    Master Mo, Your Wife’s Multiple Identities Are Online Again
    General · Cang
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y5mth
    Replied to Emilly_y

    I forgot to add, fl must have bipolar because she can't decide if she's strong or weak. And ml likes to be a tree.

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    Mr. CEO, Your Wife is A Hidden BOSS!
    Urban · Ten Catties
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y5mth
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    all the characters have alzheimer's, ml should have at least a normal IQ but even though he has a lot of relevant information about fl he still thinks he slept with wang li and not fl who he knows was sent to the psychiatric hospital after giving birth, he must have Alzheimer's at the maximum level, in the end all the characters are very superficial, the novel is a repetition of random people accusing the fl and after a few chapters they treat her like a goddess, I forgot to say that everyone has Alzheimer's because I think I even had Alzheimer's reading the novel. repeat, repeat, repeat.

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    Mr. CEO, Your Wife is A Hidden BOSS!
    Urban · Ten Catties
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y5mth
    Replied to rachelesque

    all the characters have alzheimer's, ml should have at least a normal IQ but even though he has a lot of relevant information about fl he still thinks he slept with wang li and not fl who he knows was sent to the psychiatric hospital after giving birth, he must have Alzheimer's at the maximum level, in the end all the characters are very superficial, the novel is a repetition of random people accusing the fl and after a few chapters they treat her like a goddess, I forgot to say that everyone has Alzheimer's because I think I even had Alzheimer's reading the novel. repeat, repeat, repeat.

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    Mr. CEO, Your Wife is A Hidden BOSS!
    Urban · Ten Catties
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y11mth
    Replied to catvi

    I would give it a maximum of 1 star, or even less if possible. (Apologies for any errors in my English, as it is not my native language.) I read up to chapter 640, and it was bad, but I managed to continue due to the kingdom construction aspect. However, starting from chapter 631, it became complete rubbish. A journey that used to take 30 days turned into a day in the desert, hahaha! It felt like the author gave up writing and let their dog take over. The quality deteriorated so much after chapter 631 that I felt like punching my computer. I endured reading 631 chapters of poor quality, and to make matters worse, even a child wouldn't write that badly. Honestly, if I had known this would happen, I would have abandoned it and not wasted my time. Another point is that if you don't enjoy watching gameplay of a game, then don't read it, because the story is essentially a gameplay description spread over numerous chapters. The world-building is terrible, the plot constantly changes, other characters are merely NPCs with whom you can't form a bond, and the protagonist is just someone with many psychological issues. I wouldn't be surprised if, in the end, the protagonist wakes up in a hospital bed in a coma, as the author's creativity in writing feels like being trapped in my nightmares at night. In the end, I only feel sadness and disappointment for the time lost reading this.

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    Lord of the Oasis
    Games · Ji Mansion's Old Zhao
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y1yr
    Replied to Emilly_y

    To complement my thinking. Personalities development rank for me: First Silvia: op in real life, cute but a queen, wants to evolve, narcissistic but not extreme. Second Isolde: silly but cute, great friend, honorable, carefree, fragility for being seen as manly many times, comical. Third evie: problems with money, does not have marked development yet, problems socializing, low self-esteem?, it is only third because the author wrote more interaction because otherwise any other friend of silvia would be here, especially pamela or even the spoiled lily who could have a nice plot twist and personality growth. I'm being very impartial in this classification because the one I like the most is isolde and for now I don't even have a strong attachment to evie from what I've read so far, I still think that the best and with more potential for fl would be silvia and with plenty of room to improve yet as a character, there could be better development for evie but it has to be a giant leap otherwise it's not worth it.

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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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  • Emilly_y
    Emilly_y1yr
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    Sorry but English is not my native language. I read a lot of reviews and I saw that the author has already made a lot of promises so I'm just going to say my opinion about the fl, I'm on chapter 151 and if the fl is evie in my opinion it's a big shot in the author's foot, I feel it would be a love toxic because it all started with the guilt that mc felt, it could be cliche if fl was silvia for being the first girl to be introduced but i think it's much better because mc didn't have contact with her in the past life but in this one she should being one of the ones who would have the most to earn money in addition to her personality being cute because she still wants to evolve even though she is the op in real life, I think that even isolde would be a much more interesting fl, so I hope that evie is not the fl because it would be forced. For now I'm going to drop, accumulate chapters and wait for spoilers from the fl, but I thank the author because it's still a good story in this sea of trash that is wb. Finally, I'm not really in favor of harem but there are cases like this story where the girls' development is very good, I think it should be harem instead of ending up like in anime where the childhood friend is abandoned hahahaha I'll never understand why not -harem develops the personalities of the girls around the mc so well but the harem stories don't, I feel agony.

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    MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist
    Games · MiuNovels
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