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Just finished reading this fic. Was hoping to know if you were going to continue writing. It’s one of the rare Naruto fanfics that the mc isn’t Kage level the moment he is born. Really interested in how you were going to deal with Danzo after the Chunin exams. Really great work thanks for writing it.
Great fanfic really captured the characters and world. As for the translation I don’t know the accuracy for I don’t know the language but the grammar and syntax is fin amiable. I highly recommend reading this fanfic as either a Naruto or a Demon Slayer Fan.
Hope this one gets picked up. Good story!!
Hope this gets picked this has a nice leveling system for the world and a decent hook.
Just a few common mix ups with he and she are the only grammatical mistakes I noticed. But this is a nice story so far a bit of a fast power up for the mc but still well pace with story . Pretty good story nonetheless. Hope it gets picked up!!
Best Sakura I’ve ever read in a fanfic. Love the MC/OC and his team. Love oc/Mc being a swordsmen and training Sakura and Ino shows he cares more for sister that he even helped with her friendship with her. Just really enjoy this fanfic. Great job to the creator and highly recommended to any readers.
I think it’s missing something in the middle it kinda jumped in and out. Maybe that part didn’t upload properly.
Wait a second he was an anbu under Minato and at most for 4-5 years. With 6-9 months of that being him guarding Kushina while she was pregnant. I'm sure Kakkashi has killed women and children (Rin) but I would guess that they are fellow Shinobi. I don't see Minato ordering him to kill an entire family Hiruzen maybe depending on your view of him.