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Lv13

A free spirit roaming through the world.

2018-09-12 JoinedUnited States
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1d
    Commented

    This is too premature honestly. He has deeper relationships with the other woman. Only reason Author choose these two is because of they were virgins.

    Ch 172 … Together (1) {**}
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    Debauchery of a Soul-Eating Wraith
    Fantasy · NatePrince
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday7d
    Commented

    Why did this have to turn into a system novel. That’s lame.

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: The Other World.
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    Greatest Spy Reincarnated Into Another World
    Fantasy · Aspyre
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1mth
    Posted

    Let’s start with the story and the MC. Plot is extremely convoluted. MC is an already powerful being but wants to learn the ways of cultivation when he’s already at the peak of the universe. That’s fine and bearable, but the author decides to write the cliche “he starts from the bottom/Outer Sect and progress forward” Author wants to make this large and grand world but starts in the least interesting spot. This novel R18 + MC Overpowered. You could’ve explored the culture and dynamics behind the world in more creative ways. Speaking of the author. Writing Quality is poor. Author info dumps paragraphs of information between actions of chapters. The dialogue is also childish. Cultivators that are centuries old are behaving like middle school girls. Which leads to the weak dynamics of characters. All of them feel flat and uninteresting. Even the most intriguing thing, the multiverse, is but on the back burn as it’s focused on cultivation. Like cmon, why couldn’t the MC introduced magic into the world to usher a new era.

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    Magic Sect of Beauties: The Strongest Mage is in a Cultivation World
    Eastern · CastlePanda
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1mth
    Commented

    Lord Larnak wasn’t even a villain. Dude got his heirloom stolen and tried to avenge himself. The bigger culprit is the MC and his allies.

    Ch 97 Seen To The End
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    Debauchery of a Soul-Eating Wraith
    Fantasy · NatePrince
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1mth
    Commented

    Why would he need to be reasonable if the MC is at fault. It’s a heirloom.

    Not only did Larnak not look like the reasonable understanding type, but all around Evian were prime souls just begging to be eaten!
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    Debauchery of a Soul-Eating Wraith
    Fantasy · NatePrince
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday4mth
    Posted

    This is the author’s self insert fantasy about sleeping with Korean women and I refuse to believe anything else. There’s constant prejudice about the Korean male and how superior the White American is. The sex scenes in the novel are trash because the sex is barely described. At most, you get a few sentences. The story is complicated for no reason. The MC has unnecessary family drama with his original family. I could tell the author is a virgin and is writing a self insert from all the pornhwa they read.

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    Villain: Transmigrated Into A NTR Manga As The Antagonist
    Urban · Zentmeister
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday5mth
    Posted

    Second review [as of Chapter 162] Before I begin. The story is at best (C+). It’s a fun read if you have nothing else to read or stockpiling chapters from another series. The world feels hollow. There’s a lot of kingdoms and three empires named but the kingdoms are pretty worthless since the first 70 chapters were spent in the capital - which had no name apparently. It was just called the Capital. The MC is barely described. We just know his name. He’s handsome and has a big dick. How big it is, we don’t know? How tall is he, we don’t know? What’s his hair and eye color. No idea. MC is just a cardboard with a penis and sword. Fight scenes are difficult to follow because the author overly describes the smallest action. Which makes it hard to understand the overall picture. The H scenes are somewhat boring because Wu Long was praised as the God of Pleasure but the sex is pretty vanilla and bland. The best scene was the foreplay therapy for Sui Luxiao. H scenes are not on the level and intensity as Festering Desire, Profane Prince of Domination or even Dual Cultivation. (D+) at best. If you’re here to read for H scene. You’ll be disappointed.

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    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday5mth
    Replied to madesaturday

    I don’t need to read the entirety of a story to critique facets beyond it’s completion. You have issues with grammar. You have issues with dialogue. You have issues with info dumping. My review never stated I didn’t like the story. Whether you intended to or not, your work is an imitation of another popular novel on this site. The majority of comments on your first few chapters agree on that imitation. Worry about starting not with ellipses every time a character speaks.

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    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday5mth
    Commented

    Forced plot

    Ch 24 Two Love Birds
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    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday5mth
    Posted

    The novel begins as a complete rip-off from Dual Cultivation. And that continues well into Chapter 20 and beyond. I do like how cultivation level isn’t the end all be all for battles. As early on, the MC, Wu Long is able to battle 3 levels above due to his experience. The author also does too much info-dumping in the middle of chapters which slows the pacing of the story and bogs it for no reason. The dialogue and flow of battle is also awkward and hard to follow because the author is unable to be concise. This results in the MC’s speech lasting for several paragraphs whenever he flexes on fodder characters. Or the frequent use of starting dialogue with ellipses. Overall it’s a decent novel that imitates Dual Cultivation and has yet to define itself. Even the title has Dual Cultivation. Don’t expect much creativity as it follows the standard tropes and Chinese sayings even though the author is not Chinese or from that background.

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    Dual Cultivation God Returns
    Eastern · DaoistGreenOnion
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1yr
    Commented

    We snapping peoples arm now for no reason?

    Ch 26 Prince Ryan to the Rescue!
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    Harem Overlord: I ALWAYS Finish Quick!
    Fantasy · 2Big2FitIn
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1yr
    Commented

    Writing is all over the place. Story would’ve been better if it wasnt isekai.

    Ch 7 Mila: "Remove Your Shirt"
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    Harem Overlord: I ALWAYS Finish Quick!
    Fantasy · 2Big2FitIn
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1yr
    Commented

    That word wasn’t even needed. All you had to say was ‘memory’. You get the same point across.

    Kaze used his hyperthymestic memory to memorize the scroll. Then he waved his hand, and a wall of twisting space sealed off the doors and windows from his throne room.
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    Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse
    Fantasy · Margrave
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1yr
    Commented

    Going to report this novel for pedophilia

    Ch 82 End of the Parade
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    Festering Desire
    Urban · thegrandmagi
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday1yr
    Commented

    Romance feels cheesy but cool story.

    Ch 40 Heavenly Cloud Step
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    Legendary Soul Art
    Fantasy · Piokilek
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday2yr
    Replied to Gemini_Leabres

    Well... because the first hundred chapters was released every other month and the author was trying to rob us for coins. That and the story is purposely milked to keep taking our coins

    Ch 894 Sacred Lands
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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday2yr
    Commented

    Why is he hiding his identity again ?

    Ch 169 Yu An's Gift
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    Naked Sword Art
    Eastern · RaLegacy
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday2yr
    Commented

    Why he not getting any cheeks ?

    Ch 192 Zither Goddess
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    Cultivation Online
    Games · MyLittleBrother
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday2yr
    Commented

    Serious question, What happens when they all go to the Divine Heaven? The author will just forget about them because more harem members will appear

    Ch 751 Finding a New Sect Master for the Heavenly Swan Sect
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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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  • madesaturday
    madesaturday2yr
    Commented

    When we gonna get to the actual plot ? We still dont know who the old man was or why his body was stolen

    Ch 718 Introducing the Family
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    Dual Cultivation
    Eastern · MyLittleBrother
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