Darkwood
Well, I have given the devil his dues and started posting my novel here. Obligatory links: https://discord.gg/6kEgb5Q https://ko-fi.com/darkwood
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I have played both warband and bannerlord so probably in some measure.
Your 1st and 4th points are the same, no map. And having a map takes time and/or money to make. Something that has been partially solved already since it has been a long time since I wrote chapter 13. There is a map in the discord and on the kofi page that I link to at the end of every chapter. Your 2nd point is a fair critique assuming that I intended to make an infallible character not someone who had literally just inherited his land on chapter 1, he will be reliant on those around him. If it is the matter of them being guests that you are critiquing then I can only say we have a difference of opinion on what a flaw is. Your 5th point should not even be a point at all if you have read even the synopsis of the story. No, he is not.
Once again I am here to ask, why do I always mix up feat and feet?
Something more akin to ck2/3.
Sorry I didn't see this sooner, but basically yes. I mean a title is a title.[img=recommend]
You do realise that this is set in a medieval period right? being born in the right position was very important back then. It is meant to be a matter of rising to the challenge despite being inadequate than being good enough from the start.
I apologise for not making the main character omnipotent from the start of the novel but I do not intend to write a story like that. Braydon will not start out being a genius after years of neglect by his father which has already been mentioned by this point in the story. He has a certain skillset to start out with, that is being good at fighting. Being a lord is not all fighting all of the time. He will be out of his element in more social and managerial roles to begin with. Rhydian is a mentor character for Braydon, he is meant to be strong and competent. And Nela is meant to be a naturally smart person, just because the MC does not have 600 iq does not mean that he is a useless character. Literally 3 things have happened by this point in the story, 1 of them include the MC's skillset.
Funny you should say that as today, I have started posting chapters again now that my uni deadlines are over.
It is actually just 1 rank above. Earl is the same rank as count. A female earl is just plainly called a countess