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BlackArchangel

BlackArchangel

Lv10

1st novel KoG, loved it

2018-09-08 JoinedIndia
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  • BlackArchangel
    BlackArchangel2yr
    Commented

    Thank you for keeping up the promise

    Ch 184 Advantages Of Being A Lady In A Boys Group!
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  • BlackArchangel
    BlackArchangel2yr
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    "What are u guys doing" probably

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  • BlackArchangel
    BlackArchangel2yr
    Commented

    I think it should be "hearing Delia's sob" not "son"

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  • BlackArchangel
    BlackArchangel2yr
    Replied to Springs_Halo

    when can expect the new chap?

    Ch 173 A Strange Reunion
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  • BlackArchangel
    BlackArchangel2yr
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    Sovereign

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    BlackArchangel2yr
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    Lord

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  • BlackArchangel
    BlackArchangel2yr
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    I'm fan of cultivation novel, this is one of the good so far I've read. The story has so much potential. Currently I'm at chap.150 and I wanted give few advice if author don't mind . 1. I noticed you skipping 90% of fight just by announcing the result. IMO it'll be more entertaining if add how he defeated hus opponent or how he was defeated in a fight. 2. In important fights even try to the give description of the technique, stance how the weapon look like etc 3. Add more detail while describing character because it help us imagine the in head. Like what their height how their figure ( silm, skiny, well bulit etc) how the look like, what they're waring etc. 4. If you can then give us a auxiliary chapter regarding details of cultivation realm, like the name of the initial level, grades of alchemist and formation master, also level of the alchemy item (Pill, Potion), array level, weapon grade etc.

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