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MidnightBlues_2mthCommentedshould be "he is the most vulnerable " i think autocorrect made it venerable
System Yang replied, [Master said to use it well for the preparation of your player, after all he is the most venerable one among the team members. You can repay it by installment or whenever you have money. There are no problems with interest. Master doesn't even care about such little money.]- MidnightBlues_2mthReplied to Nilphy
so glad your continuing the story. it was on hiatus for a longer period and i therefore took a break from reading it! I love the story. some characters more then others but thank you for creating such a fantastic workd
Because of this surprising event, most couples who wish to spend a lifetime together had undergone proper ceremonies and as they've expected those who vowed as mates received some kind of tattoo of the couple's body as well. The design differs for each couple. But among those polygamous couples only Tuzi and his two men received the same blessing for some unknown reason. This is something that will happen in the future. - MidnightBlues_2mthCommented
should be partial towards him .impartial means unbiased! loving the story though
Because of this surprising event, most couples who wish to spend a lifetime together had undergone proper ceremonies and as they've expected those who vowed as mates received some kind of tattoo of the couple's body as well. The design differs for each couple. But among those polygamous couples only Tuzi and his two men received the same blessing for some unknown reason. This is something that will happen in the future. - MidnightBlues_5mthReplied to Cheyenne_Martin_6176
huh?
From his window Bai Lang could see a husband pushing his wife into the mob of zombies to get away. At the other end of the street a child's crying was attracting the monsters, therefore the mother decisively put down the child turned away and ran. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to xXkiaraXx
sorry for spamming your comment but i forgot to say: All i can say is they are really important to the story. and their back story will be crucial as well. if you decide to stick with my story ty. and look forward to the reupload i hope to have it done by the end of this month or the end of februari depending how much chapters i will have to add and how busy my work is!! if my reupload is completed i will change the cover, so your welcome to wait for that as well. if you do i hope you leave a comment to let me know what you thought of the change!!
Ch 34 The paths in front of him once again - Maritsu and Gabriel POV - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to xXkiaraXx
i am new to writing and only now learned alot. so i also found out that Bai Georgi's dreams, Bai Lang's personality and Mitzuki's experience in hostile territory is way glossed over. i will be adding some twists to the story which were already there but i was waiting to tell them after rebirth, but now their alive so long it will be pulled forward, so you can expect like ,35 to 55 chapters being insterted before the Maritsu and Gabriel's arc. but i don't want to stop updating for the few readers which are reading my story..... which makes it hard. because like you said, i have lost sight of my two main protagonist.....
Ch 34 The paths in front of him once again - Maritsu and Gabriel POV - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to xXkiaraXx
i fully agree. i didn't plan on the front of the story being so long, the main characters should be dead by now which would lead me to be able to build the world and it's Paradise, and so i didn't repeat myself i kinda skipped that part. after all if i explained it once then they died and then i had to repeat it all it seemed kind of overkill. now they are still happily alive, i realized that error and therefore i am fully rewriting and re editing my story, but since i have a full time job and need to update daily it takes some time. about 30/35 chapters or probably even more will be added based on Bai Langs and Mitzuki and the world Paradise before and after Bai Lang was abandoned. So while we see Alexis being introduced in those chapters, Maritsu and Gabriel's story arc which i am writing now will be moved way back. their characters are important because the apocalypse focuses on four main groups, so their history, how they knew eachother and what there connections are is important to the story. Mainly Bai Lang, Alexis, Gabriel's and Georgi's group will be the center of the story Therefore I will continue to delve deeper in every character. To know which characters your dealing with and to know why they would do certain actions in the future Paradise Because of my rewrite i will also correct the fact that Bai Lang and Mitzuki kinda seem irrelevant characters now, i already added about 4 chapters, so far, which fully contains world building and Bai Lang. Before even seeing Mitzuki POV when he is on a missiom but i will reupload it when i am fully done, so i hope you will continue to wait.... thank you for your comment. i really appreciate it. and i hope you will enjoy my book. I would be really sorry if you didn't like it..... After all writers create a world hoping that others will enjoy partaking in that world so i hope you give me some time to create a world for you. if not ty for giving my book a chance!
Ch 34 The paths in front of him once again - Maritsu and Gabriel POV - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to PicatrixPuff
He is. He will suprise is all
The fact that Alexis did the most dangerous part of the missions himself often build him a lot of prestige in the army and made him quickly accumulate merit. It also was the reason why Alexis was the youngest person yet to be applying for the Night Hawks, at just 18 years old. Most people could only apply to the Night Hawks at 21, because only then would they have built enough prestige and merit to qualify for application. Of course, just merit and prestige weren't enough, to join the Nigh Hawks, you would also need to have enough skills. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to Sir_Killington
thank you only just saw the chapter comments really weird didn't get a message from it before. i did remove it once
This paragraph has been deleted. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to Sunny_Shumail
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Case in point. Every time Mitzuki left for his missions, Bai Lang was always worried and scared, praying and hoping that Mitzuki would return to him once more unharmed. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to Sunny_Shumail
me too
However, he didn't really care if she would accept him or not. He just agreed to the engagement to make his family happy. If he had someone he liked, he would have refused, but that wasn't the case, or so he thought. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to Sunny_Shumail
It is hard to write about a genius sometimes though
In Claire's eyes, he was everything her fiancé, Bai Lang, wasn't. Bai Lang, in Claire's opinion, was 'nerdy'. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to Sunny_ShumailCh 1 The start of everything (1)
- MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to Sunny_Shumail
sadly it happens all the time.
Bai Lang didn't want to disappoint his family, which, according to them, he did on a regular basis. Therefore, he simply agreed to the engagement without a second thought. - MidnightBlues_1yrCommentedCh 1 The Necronis Kingdom
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if one group the leader has to stay mortal you have some story option .do they age faster and therefore have more instability in their house then other houses? interesting aand curious about what is to come...mm but first sleep
These four main races rule over the kingdom as the four houses, House Vertigo for the human family, House Dracula founded by the Vampires progenitor, House Calypso founded by the Liches progenitor, and finally, House Eternius founded by the Wraiths progenitor. It is said that the founders of each house were siblings before the kingdom was founded, however this rumour has been left unconfirmed by the three remaining progenitors of the houses. Excluding House Dracula, whose heirs are born Vampires, the other three houses require the heir to have at least one child before they become undead. House Vertigo, However, requires that whoever is the head of the house stay mortal and human until they wish to retire at which point they may choose any form of undeath to stay alive if they so wish. These four houses rule the kingdom as equals, even deferring to each other for their respective territories, leading to a close relationship between all the members of any given generation. - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to mimikyu
thank you for the comment. i learned alot as a writer so i am editing some chapters and adding some background info. My English sometimes needs some polishing. i bought and editor and i hope to be able to give you better chapters. thank you for your vote of confidence it came at the right time. it made me Rlly happy!
Ch 21 The Road towards his future (1) - Maritsu POV (1) - MidnightBlues_1yrReplied to PicatrixPuff
If the father appears it will appear in Paradise, but he might not appear at all. let's just say i believe in Karma. Maritu's story is based on the choices he made when he was faced with the news of his brother's death.
Ch 20 Returning to Basics - Gabriel POV (1) & Maritsu POV (1)