I should know.

There's a slight inconsistency in the MC's reaction to meeting Rache Bartmoss. It lacked the surprise and shock that was expected when meeting a legendary netrunner who was supposedly dead and surrounded by urban legends. A paragraph describing the MC's surprise and shock at the unexpected encounter would make everything perfect. Just a constructive observation.

Yes. Vincent, the suspicious child who started interrogating the MC after his name was discovered.

It turned out better than I thought. Susan didn't die. We saw the MC's skills in action. Now I can sleep peacefully.

I have a bad feeling that something is going to go wrong... Is it me being too paranoid because things have been going too well for too long or has it really come to that moment when something bad happens to motivate the MC to get stronger. And now with this scene... Those of you who are experienced readers know what is likely to happen to motivate the MC to get stronger. And I hate it! This feeling is very unsettling. I hope that's not what I'm thinking.

I read a few chapters and I'm really enjoying the writing. We experienced readers know how to distinguish between children's writing that appears to have been written by a child and mature writing that was done by an experienced or talented writer. In this fic it is the second, 5 star writing quality.

I'm a new reader of this fic. I haven't started reading it yet, but it's in my library. I always check the reviews and wanted to know the reason for your strangely negative review. You only left a negative review and didn't write any reviews to express your reasons. Could you enlighten me?

I'm thinking about reading it. But first I want to know if what the brother said is completely true. Or he stopped reading before the situation developed for the better.

So now he can't have any more female friends because of her? This is disappointing

The system has been very quiet lately. It seems he was upset that Axel blackmailed him and called him worthless.

Little Gray would be a great love interest. She deserves some love, making up for that tragic ending of hers.

Are we thinking about the same thing? Hidan is a perfect life force battery just waiting to be sucked up.

And we cannot forget the priest with extreme vitality. Can you imagine what all that vitality would do with the opening of the 8 gates?

It appears to be very good. And I'm also thinking about trying it. But I'm already reading a work and I like to finish one before starting another. When I start reading, I'll come back here to tell you what I thought. But if you read it first, come back and tell me what you think. I thank you very much.

Hey bro, there won't be NTR, don't worry. The comment that was deleted was this 👇🏾

Fugin: "...Your methods would just give our village a bad name like the Village of the Bloody Mist. I'm sure that no one here wants our village to meet the same fate as Kirigakure." We:

Now author-san might not post the missing chapter today just to show who's boss.

Thank you for the clarification, author-san. I'm relieved to know.

Good. It looks very interesting and I'm going to give it a chance, but there's one thing that puts me off. This cheating tag... What exactly does it refer to? In a Harem novel this tag is often very dangerous. Will women betray the MC? Or is it something else?