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XIAOYUN79752yrCommentedit should be 100 meters right, 100 miles are u kiddingme
The sound of a sharp blade cutting through the air rang in everyone's ears. At the same time, a small piece of wood pierced through the bull's-eye a hundred miles away, directly piercing through the bull's-eye.- XIAOYUN79752yrPosted
There are too many grammatical mistakes you should edit them properly Initiation is already problematic making main characters she when it should be he for other things we will see how author reacts to comments and the remedies he makes
detailThe Moment I Started High School, I Formed a Contract With the Crimson Dragon QueenEastern · Eternal Dream - XIAOYUN79753yrCommented
this paragraph is too confusing what does it even mean
If Beard found out that he had only become a level-2 mage after enduring for a few days until his beard turned white, then it would only take a few days for him to reach that level. He would definitely be furious.