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lordpickyreader1yrCommentedCh 11 Chapter 11 The Stalker And The Mother- lordpickyreader1yrReplied to Hungry_Hugo
yeah but not for more than a second. if you think about this like an actual real life situation the girl would have had to approach him from a distance. He would have had enough time to see her, see her breasts, and look away because that's what a normal person does. than she would have asked a question. but that didn't happen that implies he was actually staring at her breasts the entire time. like a pervert.
For example, if Master Jet were to catch him staring again and ask what he was looking at, instead of embarrassing himself Sunny would have been able to endure a bit of pain and simply say "You." - lordpickyreader1yrPosted
Author here to let you know that this is going to be a work in progress for at least a couple of months. I intend to write as many chapters as I can and release them all at once. I'll be working on the synopsis for the first couple of days to make sure it fits the story right now it's just the general gist. Please add it to your list if you are interested in following my progress.
- lordpickyreader1yrCommented
I'm already sensing a cliche
This was how the young Sleepers had subconsciously divided themselves. The only exception from this rule was the silver-haired girl, who stood alone and apart from everyone, seemingly indifferent to tension and nervousness that permeated the air. She was leaning against a wall with her eyes closed, still listening to music. - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
Bro just described a child
The quiet girl was delicate, demure and very pretty. Her clothes were tidy and neat. They weren't very expensive, but still rather tasteful. With her pale blond hair, big blue eyes and exquisite face, she looked like a beautiful porcelain doll. - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
no even worse he's a pervert
Still, weren't their reactions a bit exaggerated? It's not like he was carrying an infectious disease. Well, except for the Spell. But it wasn't really a disease, which everyone here should have known already. - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
or maybe don't look at people's breast like a pervert
For example, if Master Jet were to catch him staring again and ask what he was looking at, instead of embarrassing himself Sunny would have been able to endure a bit of pain and simply say "You." - lordpickyreader1yrReplied to Abandonstyx
not really you don't see a lot of female characters behave the way a lot of male characters do it's actually a pretty obvious observation but sure it sexist to point out the obvious
After a short series of conversations, Sunny had acquired a reputation of an obnoxious, foul-mouthed pervert. This reputation was quickly solidified. He was slapped a few times and even punched once. He also discovered a couple of new things about his true self — namely, that deep down inside he was apparently rude, arrogant, and more than a little bit lustful. - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
and just a second ago he was blaming everyone else for being cruel
"After the tyrant first attacked, you send me to search for water. While gathering flagons from the dead soldiers, I squeezed Bloodbane juice into each one — except my own, of course. Not enough to taste it, but enough to slowly kill anyone who would drink from them." - lordpickyreader1yrReplied to lordpickyreader
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Markus cautiously acquiesced and proceeded to remove his shirt. As he did so, he unleashed a sight that would cause many young women to swoon from overstimulation. His chest had expanded markedly and looked more whole, as opposed to before where they had an emaciated look. His lower torso had tightened slightly, highlighting six distinct bulges, perfectly ordered in a three-by-two grid. Due to his young age, these imposing features had an air of immaturity to them that indicated room for growth. From the side of his hips, two large grooves snaked down, straddling his abdominals, towards his... - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
why are you making references to his... are
Markus cautiously acquiesced and proceeded to remove his shirt. As he did so, he unleashed a sight that would cause many young women to swoon from overstimulation. His chest had expanded markedly and looked more whole, as opposed to before where they had an emaciated look. His lower torso had tightened slightly, highlighting six distinct bulges, perfectly ordered in a three-by-two grid. Due to his young age, these imposing features had an air of immaturity to them that indicated room for growth. From the side of his hips, two large grooves snaked down, straddling his abdominals, towards his... - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
dude why he's like 14
Markus cautiously acquiesced and proceeded to remove his shirt. As he did so, he unleashed a sight that would cause many young women to swoon from overstimulation. His chest had expanded markedly and looked more whole, as opposed to before where they had an emaciated look. His lower torso had tightened slightly, highlighting six distinct bulges, perfectly ordered in a three-by-two grid. Due to his young age, these imposing features had an air of immaturity to them that indicated room for growth. From the side of his hips, two large grooves snaked down, straddling his abdominals, towards his... - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
that's the name for the type of radiation that occurs not the name for the black holes border I'm pretty sure
"As you can see. Given a cosmic body with mass M, in order for it to classify as a black hole, it needs to have a radius defined by this formula. This is called the Schwarzschild radius of a black hole. And as seen here, it is defined by the fact that a black hole is able to capture light! Isn't this fascinating?" - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
Throwing shade I see... I love it
Guy no longer became a 2D cutout, like every other generic MC, that never underwent any form of character development. - lordpickyreader1yrCommented
why is one cup of tea more expensive then a single meat filled bun
Lin Mu walked into a relatively popular teahouse and looked around for an empty chair to sit. The place was packed with people. Looking around for a moment, he found a table that had one empty chair left. He spent two copper coins to order a cup of tea for him from the waiter. There were three people already sitting on the table talking with each other. - lordpickyreader3yrReplied to lordpickyreader
- lordpickyreader3yrPosted
I first started to read this novel awhile back, I was reading it while it was still updateing. I recently started to read this novel again, the story development is slow and isn't very interesting, I tryed to get past the parts that bothered me but the story is centered around a boring person with an awful personality. At fist I really liked the idea but the way the auther words the novel brothers me, he writes everything in the annoyingly negitive perspective of the character, because of this I often get annoyed and cringe at the attempts of the character acting "cool". overall it's a good idea but not done well, if the auther could rewrite the entire thing and focus on the quality it whould be better.
- lordpickyreader3yrCommented
I feel like ive heard this line 500 times
If anyone heard what Ajax said just now, they will beat him to death because beginner cultivators can only store 500 units of the essence of nature and it will take them many months to years, just to increase their cultivation technique to the next level. - lordpickyreader3yrCommented
powerless and helpless are the same thing
Ajax and his friends felt angry, powerless, and helpless. - lordpickyreader3yrCommented
really she isn't questionin this?
"Is that so… T-thank you very much for saving me! I would've surely died if not for your help! I'll do my best to repay you!"