This story already exists, A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09. I'm almost sure that this author is not Fahad09, so he stole this story, read the first and second chapters and you will see that it is a copy. If you are Fahad09, I will apologize, but I will only believe you if you post something on the FFC.net website.

This story already exists, A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09. I'm almost sure that this author is not Fahad09, so he stole this story, read the first and second chapters and you will see that it is a copy. If you are Fahad09, I will apologize, but I will only believe you if you post something on the FFC.net website.

This story already exists, A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09. I'm almost sure that this author is not Fahad09, so he stole this story, read the first and second chapters and you will see that it is a copy. If you are Fahad09, I will apologize, but I will only believe you if you post something on the FFC.net website.

This story already exists, A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09. I'm almost sure that this author is not Fahad09, so he stole this story, read the first and second chapters and you will see that it is a copy. If you are Fahad09, I will apologize, but I will only believe you if you post something on the FFC.net website.

This story already exists, A Demon Lord's Hero by Fahad09. I'm almost sure that this author is not Fahad09, so he stole this story, read the first and second chapters and you will see that it is a copy. If you are Fahad09, I will apologize, but I will only believe you if you post something on the FFC.net website.

a suggestion, how about doing a mini mission in "kenichi the mightiest disciple"? I could take some things from there to help some members of the chat, such as Akisame's body training method or the forging method analyzing Shigure's sword.

Acho que é a primeira vez que comento (tenho preguiça), mas acho que você merece. Não sei se o que vou "falar" será consertado no futuro. Vou começar perguntando, você escreveu a história no celular? Tem alguns erros no momento de usar "e" com e sem acento agudo. É comum isso acontecer com o corretor ortográfico. Outra coisa que quero deixar como observação, é os tempos adverbiais, em alguns casos você começa falando no passado, mas no meio da frase muda para o presente. Fique atento no uso do singular e do plural também. Fora isso, quero que saiba que é um ótimo primeiro capítulo para a sua primeira história.[img=recommend]