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shv_luffy98

shv_luffy98

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Reverend insanity 馃槏

2018-07-31 JoinedGlobal
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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy9815d
    Replied to EternalAngel

    title is similar but it's a different novel.. the system is different here

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    FantasyPokemon Zhu Zi
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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy9826d
    Posted

    it's kinda meh.. mc is kinda like a delinquent.. messing with others n their lives n all.. MC is targeted by some random stranger everywhere.. usually ends up with MC dealing with that person immediately.. and an elder pops up to take revenge.. it always turns out that the elder is from 'New Church" (most evil organisation in the world) or is closely related.. Immediately someone pops up to save him System has consciousness n punishes him for thinking badly about the system n all.. When asked by MC to save him system simply says it'll find someone else instead.. MC almost got a grandpa(soul in a bead here) to follow him around but the system gave him an ultimatum.. have the system or the grandpa.. he gets rid of the grandpa(not killing.. almost like releasing).. cuz system wanted monopoly over him.. n MC probably would suffer to cultivate if system left him as his foundation is really bad and it's all piled up forcefully by the system.. so almost like a slave to the system I'd say

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Posted

    caught up with the raws.. has 324 chapters as of now.. it's not bad.. readable I'd say.. MC is levelling up at an unreasonable pace n people just consider him to be a monster.. he doesn't try to hide that he's cheating(upgrade with the system).. he does it openly n others consider him a monster n nothing else.. he's said to be a reincarnator.. except for the first chapter it was completely irrelevant.. like no ideas or life experiences being recollected. A major flaw in the novel if I were to say.. Author is really bad at trying to portray tragic situations.. you basically just feel "oh he's dead.. now what".. author basically got 2 people who MC owed a lot get killed for like no reason at all.. not only tragic situations.. even other emotional situations feel very bland.. basically the story doesn't get you completely involved in it.. feel like a completely detached reader soo overall readable if you got a lot of free time n absolutely nothing else to read.. that's how I caught up with the raws atleast

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to AzureConqueror

    read the novel n caught up with the raws.. and I've to say you've omitted a lot of info which makes the novel seem trash.. some are simply wrong.. in whichever simulation there was science involved.. there was nothing like Western countries or any hindrance to MC but not to other countries n about the western fighters point which you made.. it was mentioned in every simulation that world will selects a direction for the world to progress.. it was completely random.. MC was practising eastern martial arts so he was mainly referring to eastern marital arts.. he referred a lot to Western marital arts and it was even the most important source to break through

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Commented

    sucked hard on the milk? 馃ぃ

    He laid on his mother's body and sucked hard on the milk.
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  • shv_luffy98
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    Commented

    impossible 馃ぃ

    The child's voice was very loud and clear. It sounded like a boy.
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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Commented

    house in a sewer???

    There were five or six women in ragged clothes standing in the dilapidated wooden house.
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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to MrFalan

    it could be like only if they get above C grade they get to keep the talent.. even if they get another chance to attempt beginner reincarnation they won't get another draw.. so maybe it could be like, if they got a terrible world, they can withhold their lottery chance

    [Are you sure you want to draw?]
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  • shv_luffy98
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    Commented

    wonder if it's another novel with MC not having parents

    As a transmigrator, he had been in this world for 18 years.
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  • shv_luffy98
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    Commented

    "Got an S grade?" "Sorry you too good" 馃ぃ

    Only by obtaining a C- grade in the assessment.
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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to shv_luffy98

    I'm only 23 chapters in.. n there's soo many things wrong.. usually I keep reading until about 50-60 chapters.. maybe even a 100.. cuz sometimes it turns out real nice.. but this is really damn bad.. I can't see it improving at all.. everything is a complete mess.. the author will have to overturn the entire world background to fix it

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Posted

    soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all.. One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid.. Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run.. MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else.. Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to AzureConqueror

    waiting for your update to see if I should read this

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to Objectively_Wrong

    yea that's why MC says "in the end I still need to act" 馃樁

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to shv_luffy98

    ex finance minister, imperial physician and the most wanted criminal in aurora Kingdom join in as well 馃ぃ

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to shv_luffy98

    lol.. the most powerful architect (retired but still as strong and capable), the most trusted advisor of the king (retired but still as capable) and the most powerful general(again retired but still as strong and capable) from the kingdom where MC is in.. all come to take refuge under MC.. it hasn't even been 7 days since he transmigrated.. all 3 of them are loyal and dedicated.. compared to their strengths what MC does is child's play.. buy they're all impressed af n becoming even more loyal to him

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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Posted

    Kinda exhausting to read. Seems a bit like another novel which was dropped, I wonder if it's the same author. There's annoying stuff like everyone praising MC in the world channel everytime, some people acting like they're the protagonist n considering MC as an enemy to trample on, an innocent girl who also has a legendary talent but being dependent on the MC, NPCs being impressed or being fanatical for some small things. Currently has about 300 chapters in the raws, so it might have gotten better or it's getting worse n worse n the author is still writing it, only to be dropped soon.

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  • shv_luffy98
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    Commented

    aggressive and calm 馃槷

    [Personality: Aggressive, calm, intelligent, likes to sleep and play.]
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  • shv_luffy98
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    Commented

    馃ぎ

    Bai Yi looked at him with reverence and fanaticism. She was clearly shocked by Zhou Zhou's methods just now.
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  • shv_luffy98
    shv_luffy981mth
    Replied to wild_gamer

    Lord of the People: My burst rate is 100%

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