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Insight_Owl

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  • Insight_Owl
    Insight_Owl1yr
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    One of the best nsfw novels with a great world. The only criticism is that there isn't enough chapters.

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    Valkyrie Smash
    Sci-fi · Nomanalive
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    Insight_Owl2yr
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    This is an a good novel but obviously written by a not so experienced author. Written on Chapter 353. 1. Only Anthony is a round character. Every other character is flat and can be described in one sentence. Tiny loves to fight and eat. Crinis wants to protect the MC. Even the other ants that supposedly are intelligent are not exempt. 2. Too much dialogue and is used to move the plot instead of being what the actual character would have said if he/she was real. 3. The conflicts lacks emotional dilemma. Every conflict is about survival and each time emotional conflict is possible, it has been avoided. Overall, the book has great ideas and world building but could improve in tackling interesting conflicts. This is what separates The Joker from a common superhero movie. What separates characters dreams getting destroyed as they die while a villain benefits in Game of Thrones compared to other books.

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    Chrysalis
    Fantasy · RinoZ
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