johanna2008
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really !! In that case, I'm leaving , you just ruined my day .
it is confusing 😕
I did not mean to criticize you or anything, and I am sorry if my comment makes you think that your story is not progressing the way you want. I am not a writer, and maybe I don't understand the hard work you do to come up with your story, but that doesn't mean I don't appreciate the effort and time you spend doing so. I do, and I like your novel very much. It is just that I think it is time for the overall power of the sect to progress. I mean, it has been too long, and yet the elders and disciples cultivation hasn't risen that much, in spite of all the resources the sect gets from the expansion and all the powerful kingdoms that joined them. Again, I am not a writer; I am just a reader who enjoys reading your work, and I am giving you my opinion as a reader, no more than that. Sorry again if I cause any problems. 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😚😚😚😚😚😚
Why doesn't he tell the world the truth about him and what he did, and destroy the righteous character he set for himself.? I mean, he tried to present himself to the world as the most righteous and honest person who sacrificed his life for them 3,000 thousand years ago. It would really be great if he came back and found out that all his efforts were in vain.
is there no way for his father to get his core fixed or something ???
She starts getting on my nerves. Really, I understand that mothers can be protective, but not like this. This motherly love can be suffocating sometimes. Leave him a little space for him to breathe, Godsake.
can't he try to help them get stronger or something? what if something bad happens and he wasn't there to help like before?
he was not like that a few days ago . Power really changed people, and in his case, it's making him arrogant and stupid.
who is this mother ?? is she controlling them or something ? cab she read their minds and observe their movements?
truck-kun struck again !!
is he an orphan ? or did his family go somewhere?
Everything written here is illogical and ridiculous. It is, after all, a fantasy world of magic and cultivation. I understand, but making children act and talk like 30- or 40-year-old adults is ridiculous. Take, for example, our MC .He was sold as a slave when he was only two years old and was kept at his new adopted parents' house for years with no contact with society. He had no idea what life was like outside of that house, and he was only 14 when he died. He was a teen physically, but mentally, I believe he is still a 6-year-old boy because that family began abusing him as a slave at that age. However, the author portrays him as an adult here !I mean, he and the other trail participants are only 10 years old. Seriously, even in a fiction book, you need to be a little reasonable at times.
Well, we can't rule that out, I mean, he was normal when he was a kid, but suddenly he changed, and beacom, a jerk and unlovable person who harm his family for an outsiders .
I think it is time for the overall strength of the sect to increase.