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Alreth2dCommentedIf i had a penny everytime a mother had a twisted sense of love in this ff, I would have 2 pennies.....which isnt a lot....but its weird it happened twice. Also, regarding portrayal of Blaise mother, i think it fits or you have done a good job at making it fit. (Remember folks if she is crazy then she must be equally hot if not hotter)(pun intended)
AN: I'm not sure about my portrayal of Blaise's mother, to be perfectly honest. There is a lot to it, and the situation is a bit more complicated than she is showing in this chapter... I rewrote this chapter two times while trying not to give away too much of her plan, before settling on this since it felt the most natural. Please let me know what you think and if you have any suggestions.- Alreth7dCommented
Mc after hearing about this. "To all covenant citizens and combat personnels, know your death is on the hands of your leaders."
For the Covenant this was a suicide mission from the start, they would be the sacrifice that leads to a massive Galactic war between the humans and the Covenant empire. - Alreth7dCommented
"You have my assurance." "Which doesnt have a lot of value."😂
"You have my assurance," 'Varumee continued calmly. "We request a meeting with your leaders to discuss terms." - Alreth8dCommented
Nice.
"Maybe, after all, unlike my brother, I have no qualms about achieving a permanent solution to problems as dangerous as you." - Alreth8dCommented
No hesitation, No attachments😂 Bro was like: aight then.
'What...!? That's it?! He risked being caught by the authorities, spotted by my parents or the neighbors, me shutting the windowsill when I saw him, confessed he stalked me, declared he was IN LOVE with me, told me to stop meeting my boyfriend who I love more than anything, and when I told him no, he just up and left!?' Saki thought, instinctively reaching out for him, jolting up from her bed as her entire attention was now directed at him. - Alreth8dReplied to Sleeping_MistThe Second would be the development of more powerful technology. He already had an A.I. for himself but that A.I. was limited in it's ability. Instead he wanted to create another more Powerful A.I. that would not be limited by the UNSC rules and regulations regarding A.I.
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Lily out here pulling the doctor lines. Being so powerful and smart, legitimately just existing is enough of a warning.😂
The redhead interrupted him, "The world could burn for all I care. You might be an Archmage of Light, but you know perfectly well how dangerous I could be when I'm dedicated, the damage I could cause to anyone's cause. You know the stories, you know who I am, what I'm capable of… It took members of your precious Order, the department of Mysteries, Voldemort's top lieutenants, and a small army of mercenaries to ambush me and my child, to even stop me, and even then, I was the one who won. Do you think you can make that happen again, especially when I'm prepared for a fight?" - Alreth9dCommented
Yuuto be having a field day with the bodies he about to drop.
"Fair enough..." Gyarune sighed as he left Hugh's office. - Alreth9dReplied to Hazy_0832
Iam not throwing hate at you or your work, I like it honestly.....but....uh.....his....."psychotic urges" is valid at this point. Woman not only cheated on the MC (well not actually him but the previous soul/holder of the body) and decided to rat him out to the brother of the NTR man thus leading to the school hypnotized plus some cops and mc fighting to survive for the past few chapters. Again no hate at you or your work, but if someones ACTIVE actions and decisions almost gets me killed (in more than one occation) (in mcs case) then yes, they go 6ft under.
Yuuto paused, a hint of surprise crossing his features as Kanoko unleashed a barrage of furious punches on Nao, pinning her down and striking her face repeatedly, her expression one of wild frenzy. - Alreth9dCommented
WHAT BS!
Just then, Kanoko lunged at Nao, tackling her to the ground. Kaede ran toward Yuuto, embracing him from behind. - Alreth9dCommentedThe bullet pierced his skull, ending his life instantly.
- Alreth9dCommented
MC: Nice moves....however......GUN.
Dambe might be a fearsome martial art, but it has yet to stop bullets. - Alreth13dCommented
....better question is...what is NOT wrong with him. just kidding😂
Revan glanced over at Peter, his expression saying it all. "Sometimes, I wonder if there's something wrong with you…" - Alreth14dCommented
I mean...no offense and everything but if someone was capable as itachi.....they rarely need help, much less trust said help.
She showed no reaction to his admittance and simply stated. "In order words, you don't trust the competency and ruling of the Head Captain and Gotei 13." - Alreth15dReplied to Crypthh
finished? hes gone, he dont exist anymore😂
As they walked through the grand halls of the mansion, Rose explained, "Consider it a small package from me to you, Mr. Shelton. It's my way of making sure you are taken care of. This way, you can respond without delay anytime I call on you." - Alreth15dCommented
"aggressive negotiations." HA! first time i have ever heard of such thing.
Slowly the UNSC started to reclaim worlds lost to being glassed and discover new worlds within the uncharted regions of space. Teams of specialists and AI were working on the captured Covenant ships to extract the location of Covenant space, while the Covenant prisoners were transported to a special Black site on Reach for interrogation. Axel didn't plan on attacking the Covenant directly as they didn't have the means to attack the Covenant within their own space, but eventually he planned to go to Covenant space for some aggressive negotiations. - Alreth21dCommented
so since she is gender bent....that mkes her in this ff a male.
Captain America (Peggy Carter) - Alreth21dCommented
I agree with the other comments, so far the story and world building has been great and well written.
AN: So, I decided to expand a bit on the lore and fill in the gaps I left before. I thought about doing it slowly but tbh considering what I had planned, the story would have progressed very slowly... As usual, please let me know what you think because I'm still kinda doubting my decision... - Alreth24dCommented
I quite like it and somewhat excited on the upcoming chapters, hope there is a POV of fleur soon or daphne. If not its fine. Basically, Id give this chap a 10/10
AN: I know that I say this a lot, but I'm really not sure about this chapter. I don't know. I feel I could have done it better. I'd really like your feedback on this or if you have any suggestions...