CloakedWillow
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CloakedWillow22dCommentedLOW KEY IS BEST KEY
"Whatever, even if it's a dark chat group, as long as I can lay low, reduce my desires a little, it will be fine."- CloakedWillow1mthCommented
The paragraph is backwards a tier three human defeating a tier 1 beast
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Spong Bob?
"I don't watch that freaking one century old show. The cartoon was temporary, but memes are eternal." Jay pointed to the side. "By the way, since we're done here, I will leave and prepare myself for tomorrow. You both can do the shopping yourself, right?" - CloakedWillow2mthCommentedCh 71 Thirteen’s Three Requests
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- CloakedWillow2mthCommentedThe Lightning Beast raised its head in disbelief. This human actually understood its artistic expression?
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if it's one of the most wanted pets why couldn't he find anything on raising it at first
A Moonlight Elf was one of the most well-known beasts. In the past, it was on the top ten "Beastmaster's Most Desired Beast" list. In fact, it ranked first for a very long time. - CloakedWillow2mthCommented
yes suddenly
His original body had suddenly died and his soul had transmigrated to this body in a parallel world. - CloakedWillow2mthCommented
sounds like a true pokémon Master
"It's called the Fire Dog," Riley replied. - CloakedWillow2mthCommented
I always get irritated when main characters don't invent the bicycle because it has fairly simple mechanics overall but it took years for us to create and would significantly improve the life of commoners and hypothetically exponentially increase the rate of development for a plane over time
William joined the Cultivators that were going to the Guild Hall since he didn't know the way. He admired the luxurious buildings on each side of the paved road that seemed to be out of another age. There were no vehicles or bicycles, so William assumed the road was purely aesthetic. - CloakedWillow2mthCommented
Lokey is best key
"How can a non-Cultivator be so strong?" - CloakedWillow2mthCommented
better use of the word dismay here
"No exceptions. Win the challenge if you want a discount." the Potion Master was unrelenting, much to William's dismay. He was forced to let the Alchemy Hall scam him for the potions at 4 Gold, 8 Silver. - CloakedWillow2mthReplied to NecW
yeah but dismay isn't usually used for strictly alarmed it's used for concerned alarmed (it's connotation usually has like ideas of discussed or doom so because Freya doesn't have the foreknowledge of what he's reading) as in like it would make more sense in this case if the text was changed to he cried out in dismay fria would not be the one in dismay in this scenario despite also being alarmed. again it would make more sense if after he yelled this out everyone looked at him in confusion instead of much to their dismay
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"What does much to your dismay mean? experiencing or showing feelings of alarmed concern or dismay : upset, worried, or agitated because of some unwelcome situation or occurrence. " although it might be accurate to say that the other people would be shocked would be closer to say something that would just synonym of confusion, in this context fria is more likely to be confused by his outburst because she has no idea what's going on
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dismay is not the word
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I always love a good merchant book but if I'm going to be honest this was kind of meh I will preface I only got through about 37 chapters but it started off with a really interesting concept but as it went on it just felt like your standard apocalypse story now I'm sure later on they'll probably reintroduce those earlier topics but it was kind of boring and the way he used his merchant system would have been fine if the system was some other moniker but there really did not feel like a merchant-based story felt more like a weaker version of one of those everyone gets transported to a new place to play some game and the main character has a superpower and then sells a bunch of stuff in the global channel like the novel shelter in the Apocalypse except for because it's not one of those type of novels it's significantly less fleshed out
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*especially after
'Doesn't she have cute grandbabies or great grandbabies to play with?' Wyatt wondered. However, what Wyatt did not know was that this side of the Field Marshal was a rare sight in the Lorn or the Heatsend Royal Family. The royal kids would be scared shitless just hearing her name. Only a few of them had the opportunity of seeing this side of their ancestor. Especially as Luna's betrayal. - CloakedWillow3mthCommentedCh 1787 Damned Fly
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