CloakedWillow
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LOW KEY IS BEST KEY
The paragraph is backwards a tier three human defeating a tier 1 beast
Spong Bob?
if it's one of the most wanted pets why couldn't he find anything on raising it at first
yes suddenly
sounds like a true pokémon Master
I always get irritated when main characters don't invent the bicycle because it has fairly simple mechanics overall but it took years for us to create and would significantly improve the life of commoners and hypothetically exponentially increase the rate of development for a plane over time
Lokey is best key
better use of the word dismay here
yeah but dismay isn't usually used for strictly alarmed it's used for concerned alarmed (it's connotation usually has like ideas of discussed or doom so because Freya doesn't have the foreknowledge of what he's reading) as in like it would make more sense in this case if the text was changed to he cried out in dismay fria would not be the one in dismay in this scenario despite also being alarmed. again it would make more sense if after he yelled this out everyone looked at him in confusion instead of much to their dismay
"What does much to your dismay mean? experiencing or showing feelings of alarmed concern or dismay : upset, worried, or agitated because of some unwelcome situation or occurrence. " although it might be accurate to say that the other people would be shocked would be closer to say something that would just synonym of confusion, in this context fria is more likely to be confused by his outburst because she has no idea what's going on
dismay is not the word
I always love a good merchant book but if I'm going to be honest this was kind of meh I will preface I only got through about 37 chapters but it started off with a really interesting concept but as it went on it just felt like your standard apocalypse story now I'm sure later on they'll probably reintroduce those earlier topics but it was kind of boring and the way he used his merchant system would have been fine if the system was some other moniker but there really did not feel like a merchant-based story felt more like a weaker version of one of those everyone gets transported to a new place to play some game and the main character has a superpower and then sells a bunch of stuff in the global channel like the novel shelter in the Apocalypse except for because it's not one of those type of novels it's significantly less fleshed out
*especially after