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  • SubZ
    SubZ2yr
    Posted

    Anyone know the original name of this novel? I would honestly read the raw compared to this WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW <- word fill cuz webnovel sucks

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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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  • SubZ
    SubZ2yr
    Replied to Jagesa

    Do you know the original novel's name? I would honestly rather read mtl than this dude's interpretation of it

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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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  • SubZ
    SubZ2yr
    Commented

    "This is my new book if there are any words that are wrong. Please let me know in the comments" Yes, every word and every sentence

    Ch 1 Break up with girlfriends
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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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  • SubZ
    SubZ2yr
    Commented

    100% troll novel

    Ch 87 A Treat To A Meal
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    I Found A Planet
    Sci-fi · Ming Jian
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  • SubZ
    SubZ2yr
    Commented

    can I please ask for raw source for feilu novels ^^, particularly I am a Gao Fushuai Villain, thank you.

    Ch -1 If You Guys Want To Read Advance Chapters For Free ....
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    My Girlfriend Is Really a Superstar
    Urban · legendaryking
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Commented

    what the **** is wrong with you, you fucking creep of an author

    "Aaaarghhh!!!!" A flooding pain erupted in her hands as she realised that her left hand had been cut off while her right hand was cut deeply to her bones, part of her wrist, hanging down in a bloody manner.
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Posted

    Author is too incompetent to make his own story so he stitches together however many cliches he can find, that's fine until at some point he just does disgusting things because he lacks content

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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Replied to Stardust_Breaker

    the story changed from fluffy fluffy to just being straight up disgusting, someone took her body? really? can't you distinguish between bad cliches and good ones?

    Ch 117 Sorry, I...
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    Divine Emperor of Death
    Eastern · Stardust_Breaker
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Replied to IronM

    Agreed, btw I experience the same effect reading your comment, weird how that works, huh?

    Ch 2 Level Up
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    Armipotent
    Fantasy · HotIce
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Commented

    Please get an editor, it's hard to read as it is now

    Ch 2 Level Up
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    Armipotent
    Fantasy · HotIce
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Commented

    Anyone knows which novel the author ripped? I mean it's obvs machine translated and chinese while the author is Indonesian so I bet he ripped it from somewhere

    Ch 1 Break up with girlfriends
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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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  • SubZ
    SubZ3yr
    Posted

    Grammar sucks, through s*x scenes and outside of them the author constantly intentionally uses he/she/him/her in reverse, the story is okay-ish if you manage to push through but soon enough becomes 20 long filler chapters of fights continuously going like: Ye Chen provoked, Ye Chen parried with his hand, The Enemy attacked with hidden technique, Ye Chen pulled actual technique, enemy defeated rinse and repeat. The MC just constantly matching his enemy's strength just so he can wait for them to use their full power which defeats the entire reason MC is hiding his strength in the first place.

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    Journey To Become A True God
    Eastern · DarkForces
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